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oh. hiei laying on the bed like that is so cute ^^

I noticed people giving advice about Hiei and Kurama's ages. No one knows for sure how old either of them are, officialy. In the english version Kurama is over 300, but in Japan they saw he's over a 1000 years old. They never gave an age for Hiei. People think he is under 100 because every 100 years a koorime gives birth. Yukina is Hiei's TWIN sister, so they are the same age. I, personally, don't think Yukina has had children. But no one really knows about Hiei's or Kurama's official age. Only Spirit World knows. So don't worry about what people say about ages, because they don't REALLY know, just like you and me. Update Soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^

Lol, well I won't flame but I will give you constructive criticism. There were a few grammatical errors again and often times the words were awkward. Kurama, I believe, is actually somewhere closer to 5,000 years, while Hiei might actually be under 100. Both of their ages are under much speculation. It wasn't a bad chapter in content, it just didn't read (flow) very well. I will again say that you should read at least the dialogue of your stories aloud because that should clear up a lot of the problems. On the upside, you're spinning quite a good tale about the rituals and rules of demon mating. And that's why I keep reading. :) I just wish you'd put a little bit more effort into it. A beta-reader might also be a good idea.

Just so you're aware....Hiei's age is around 277.....I do believe.....It was either 273 or 277!! Just thought you deserved to know!! Great fic...I'm anxiously awaiting an update!!

It was a good chapter, but I'm waiting for the revelation scene where everyone finds out about Hiei and Kurama. I'll wait patiently. I never really say that much when I review, I'm not to good with words. I found this new doujinshi site, //www.livejournal.com/community/yyh_dp/. It's has a lot of really cool doujinshi in it. When you get there you have to click calendar, then click [subjects], then set the calendar to August, 2004. It will have the name of the community member, and what they have posted NEXT to their name. It may say 'no subject', but it will have some doujinshi. It was really hard for me to find the all that stuff the first time I visited. airluwena, joisbishmyoga, and johinnabara have really cool doujinshi. johinnabara doesn't start posting doujinshi until February, OK. Update Soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^

Hey,you did that,like you said I have nothing o worry about,right?.Oh,you make me scare again because you didn't update like you said"a couple of day"ne?I just thought that you didn't want to write this fic anymore.Anyway,keep going,wait for your kinky lemon(he he)

Ok good chapter,but talk about drawing it out already.Feeling alittle sorry for Yusuke being just a pinch on the slow side with this.Plus something tells me you can't get rid of
Yomi so quickly as well.Can't wait for the next update hope its soon. :)

i could never flame the awsome chapter! i want to glomp hiei so much in this story!!!

:D Anticipating the discovery

YAY!!!!! See what a way to make me smile. I had two teeth pulled today (25th of March) and I was mad depressed about it not to mention in a whole lotta pain... and here I just saw that you updated!!!! What a way to make me happy again. ::Smiles all bright:: Now would you please update again soon? Maybe this weekend sometime? Since I am on house arrest until my mouth heals some??? ::Cries:: I can't even have a damn cigarette. ::Whimpers but leaves lots of flowers for her thanking her for the update:: See you soon! ::Goes to crawl in bed with her bunny and try to sleep some::