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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best lemons I have ever read. Steady pace, nice tone, lovely detail, and both Yuusuke and Kuwabara were in character. I loved it, thank you!
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. ^^ You got Kuwa pretty much IC, and also Yûsuke. Kudos to you on that one...
Although I see them using each other for sex more than an actual relationship, though.
Although I see them using each other for sex more than an actual relationship, though.
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O.......*falls to knees and bows* I'M NOT WORTHY OF SUCH WONDERFUL KUYUNESS!! T_T
Seriously NGM-chan, this is fabulous. It was great when I first read a snippit a year ago, but now, it just blows my mind. The writing style, the fact that it's all IC, and well, the SEXXX!!!! XD You need to start getting more stuff up; I've been in decent KuYu withdrawls. See? *holds up shaking hands*
Hmm, I wonder if Deviantart will let you post this? *would fave it on the KY club, yesyes*
Seriously NGM-chan, this is fabulous. It was great when I first read a snippit a year ago, but now, it just blows my mind. The writing style, the fact that it's all IC, and well, the SEXXX!!!! XD You need to start getting more stuff up; I've been in decent KuYu withdrawls. See? *holds up shaking hands*
Hmm, I wonder if Deviantart will let you post this? *would fave it on the KY club, yesyes*
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awewsome fic. Specially because it was written in first pov and you managed to keep both IC. Loved the scene were Yusuke locks
the classroom door.
I'm glad I could read more from you so soon after "Shaman's way".
Ja mata.
Kitkat
the classroom door.
I'm glad I could read more from you so soon after "Shaman's way".
Ja mata.
Kitkat
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GUH. You write such a kickass Kuwabara. Perfect amounts of guy-ness, but with that little bit of tenderness under it all. And the fingers in the hair and the hot sex and ooh yeahhdkfjs!! <3 *loves hard*
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! LOVE IT!!! LOVE!!
I just can't believe how fuckin' good that was!! Can't get enough of Kuwa/Yusuke, they're just so hot together... lol
And Kuwa was very in character, I actually heard his english dub voice with every line, seriously... but then again, I'm insane... that was too good... Great job!!
White Dog
I just can't believe how fuckin' good that was!! Can't get enough of Kuwa/Yusuke, they're just so hot together... lol
And Kuwa was very in character, I actually heard his english dub voice with every line, seriously... but then again, I'm insane... that was too good... Great job!!
White Dog
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say Kurama/Hiei is my usual favorite pair but I do have this well hidden fondness for Yusuke/Kuwabara. Nicely done. A great blend of Kuwabara's voice from the anime and lovely sex. I would enjoy reading more of your works. Really nicely done. I hope they lived mostly happily ever after. :)
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Wish it was told there Yusuke p.o.v.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That was so good. Writing this in Kuwabara's POV and keeping him wonderfully IC was just genius. Great work.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn!!!! The was so hot and sexy and one of the best fics written in first person that I have ever read. Just incredible. Damn!!!! I've never been too found of Kuwa, but I sure liked him in this, with Yusuke. Nicely done ^_~