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for The cure

by WhiteDog

schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh! feeling a little hot there , hiei? lol i cant wait to read the next chapter. this was real sweet. but you sure are evil for leaving it like that... ^__^
person \'Jita
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You absolutely cannot just leave it here like this!!! This is tourture! You really really HAVE to update this soon or I'm going to lose my mind! ^_^ This is very good and already very sexy. I can't wait to see what Yusuke's up to. Looks to me like he might just have some naughty thoughts concerning Hiei going through his pretty head. I am looking forward to it! This is my all time favorite couple. They both are just so damn sexy, so naturally together they are um...the ultimate wet dream! Yup, Toe curling sexy is what they are!!! Awesome start here. Please please please continue?!!!? I can't find many of these two and I was really starting to get irritated. I hate it when people just leave Yusuke completely out of their fics and it's seems that it's alway's Hiei/kurama! Not that they are a bad couple, I like them too but theres too many of those and no where near enough of these. *shrugs* Course that's just my oppinion. I have always thought there was alot of sexual tension between Yusuke and Hiei and they definately need to work that out!!! LEMONS LEMONS LEMONS *cough* oops...sorry, that just kinda snuck out while I wasn't looking. *sheepish grin* Anyway, I promise I will review every time if you continue this. Several times if I have to...........^_^
person mistress fire
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh that was cute slashy. please tell me your'e going to write more to this cause i so want to see those to make love.
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter please update soon
person kit-kit
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhh i see hiei getting some lovin soon.
person Trinity
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGaw!! SO FRIGGIN AWESOME!!! PLZ UPDATE PLZ UPDATE!!! (please) ^_^ sry for caps
person Altar of Wishes
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiei's difficult to care for... *hands Yusuke some burn ointment for emergencies* Be careful Yusuke!
person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was soooo goood. I applaud you. So touching and sweet and yet I think you managed to keep Hiei in character. I am so looking forward to more, especially a lemon, PLEASE!
person Skittles the Sugar Fairy
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BAAAAAAAH! You're evil. Did you know that? Leaving it hanging there like that! Oh please update this soon! I am loving where this is going!
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome! Your writting style is so beautiful and so realistic! I felt like I was there! Please keep this story going, and up date soon!