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for One Body, Two Minds

by Ametank

person jennifer
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! your such a good writer!i think i spelled that wrong...
anywhos! your bloody brilliant! im falling in love with this and theres only 3 chapthers! your so cool!<<3jenny
person Tabi
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh darling, it's absolutely AMAZING. i loved this chapter ... this story is just so... captivating, and i know i told you the first time around that i adored the concept... and this is just awesome. love it love it love it.
person animegirl007
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent....will Kurama turn into Youko as will??? Where is my brother ??? He can't still be at camp...Does he know about the death of mother and father???? more....more....more....update soon
person Starcrossed
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeeks* An update! SWEET!! Its really good! Its ok in the chapters aren't longer...no problems just as long as you keep updating. ^-^ Small, wandering question...if I...I mean..._____ can see Kurama, then how can he see _______ while she looking through his eyes. Confusedness...or maybe because I'm thinking about it too much.
person Aeri
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it...so I'm dead...that's interesting. I always wondered what it would like to be dead. It looks like I'm stuck in poor Kurama's body...with no way out XD. Update soon because it is AWESOME! ^0^
person denise
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yahoo! update soon! (hey that rhymed)
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I love it so far! Please update soon!
person tryxi
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a very interesting story. pls add me to your emailing list u can send it to the email above or icybluestarzz@yahoo.com. pls update soonn.
person kyli the wolf hanyou
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update update updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate noooooooooooww this is tight
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So..... Kurama's going to have sex with himself? Wow. That's out there.