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for One Body, Two Minds

by Ametank

person Aeri *not logged in*
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whee!!! You updated!!! *does happy dance* Uh oh...Hiei suspects something is up, curse his too observent nature *shifty eyes*. Please update soon! ^-^
person Tabi
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I don't know how many times I'm going to tell you this... but I love this story. New chapter is awesome... What I think is wonderful is the fact that, even after you've missed the show so much (and so have i *twitch*), you still slip so easily into the characters. I can hear their voices when they speak, and it's just... lovely. And still the concept, I adore it. Then there's your descriptions of the way the thoughts seem to feel and those are just great, I can feel them myself, and I love it. I love it ALL. *dances*
person KuwaLove(I was on)
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!!! Please put me on your e-mail!! It's kidconan@comic.com!! I love this story!!!! Oh my brother, I will kill anyone who tries to hurt my brother in real life and in a fic (body staring to flare up)!! (cools down and smiles) Anyway, please update soon!!!
person Jade
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I tried to give this a chance but this is just so silly. It's like a Mary-Sue role call or something. I thought that AFFnet wouldn't allow silly stories like these.
person Esth
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Took you so long to update, but I'm glad you finally did!
Please could you add me to your update list? My email is: xombra00@hotmail.com

Thanks! ^^
person Hotaru1421
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why do you refuse to update this story?Please write more!!I have been waiting for the next chapter for ever!!!PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!
person JokerFest
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how youve written this so far. It is a very interesting storyline and i hope that you write more
signed,
JOKERFEST at play
person Dani
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! Please update really soon! And I'm not sure if I asked yet, but please add me to the mailing list. I like the way you describe the feelings and lack of senses and such, it's totally mind blowing!!!
person Sapna
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh hurry and update!
person amstaff
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love your story. please add me to your update list. thank you