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wak*falls off the cliffy* damn things...eeh thats yoko huh oh dear ^^* aneways please continue!

UPDATE! That was a cliffy!! *scowl* I don't like cliffies! UPDATE!! PLEASE!!! I',m begging you!! *I'll keep reviewing you!!! I'll be your frined?!?!?!?! *puppy eyes* PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Sprry. The eys upside down. But that took me a LONG time!! PLEASE!!! UPDATE FOR ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So that's why the reader couldn't sense him...this story is one of my favorites and is one of the few i read on here. I like how you make the reader react to everything. The discreption is good too. (sorry for any misspelled words in here, i'm terrible at spelling.) The shower scene was good too. Just glad Kurama didn't come back while the reader was arousing himself. That would be beyond ackward. Leaving a preview of the next chapter at the bottom is good too. Can't wait for the next chapter! Update when you can!

o.0 .....oh my. THAT would be awkward to wake up to, not remembering you're in some guy's body and find you have no boobs. And the shower...I don't know if I would've actually been brave enough to take off the towel. ...um...has Yoko taken over? SHOULD I BE AFRAID FOR MY SANITY? ...geez, it'd be cool if I was right for once...

how embarassing

That was a great chapter. I loved it. The only small complaint I have was the fact that it wasn't longer. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Actuall I was wrong I have one other complaint and that is the who ever keeps putting your rating down. I would seriously like to kick the person who keeps giving you three stars square in butt.

Finally updated!!! YAY!!!

This is an awesome story. Though, last time I checked on it, it had only four chapters. ^__^U That's my way of saying I'm forgetful, could you add me to your email list-y thing? Thanks either way. Can't wait for the next update! ...that rhymed...

finally an update, yessssssss well update soon, pleaaaaaase

Oh man that was excitting!! I'm soo glad you finally updated!! I love this story!!! Please update soon, I want to see where I am!! or who I am in or whatever!!!