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for One Body, Two Minds

by Ametank

person Anon
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you sure you're old enough to be writing here? Because this kind of story just screams underaged fangirl. Maybe you should come back after gaining some more maturity.
person Jean
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering how you could do this in this story and slightly conserned how it would come out. I have to say as impressive as your other pieces have been, I am the most impressed with this. I give it 50/10. Ya, that makes no sence....^_^
person Hotaru1421
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE!?!?!?*cries* UPDATE!!! LET ME KNOW!!!! UPDATE!!!*cries more and rereads the last few lines over and over again*
person Chachi
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly LOVE your story!!!

.......There's nothin more to say. It's just amazing, you have an awsome talent so you must udpdate soon. OR SUFFER THE WRATH OF.....

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....LADYBUGS!!!!! What? they're evil, I mean have you every had one of them fly into your eye. Well I'l tell you IT HURTS >.< stupid bugs!!!

Huggies and MORE huggies

-Chachi-chan
person Lucifer0001
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eeeee how do you do it, you have ME squeeling in anticipation. Geeze!! Oh and by the change in Kurama and how the other conciousness felt like to her im guessing its youko... and i read Alpha and i love it and i love this one, though at the moment i like this one more, its more... differnt! I hope you can get the next chapter out soon pretty please with many cherries on top XD
person Dark
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cracks up* XD Ah, that is rich. o.o
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh geeze...I know who's out, but I promise not to tell anyone else ^_~. Ok, please update soon!!
person kyli the wolf hanyou
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UUPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE NOOOOOOW I LOVE THIS. and i know what KURAMA meant.
person Sky
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sits staring at the computer w/ her mouth wide open* WTF...um...update...um *shock sets in* OMG.
person Anon
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. Update. This I've gotta see.