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for One Body, Two Minds

by Ametank

person Tsumetai-Hi
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH originality usually an author would make Kurama their dashing, charming, hero and saves them from their inevitable death BUT NOT YOU, YOU DIDN'T TAKE THE EASY WAY OUT! GOOD JOB! continue this story it caught my attention and as The second story I've read from AdultFanfiction I congratulate you! Now I'm off to find the thrid story. I expect to see a next chapter of this ^^.

-Fare Thee Well
-Tsumetai-Hi

P.s I don't mean to offend other authors who write it with Kurama being the hero, I enjoy those stories, I'm just anti-mainstream, and I as well don't mean to offend the author of this story, if you were going to make this story Kurama being the Hero then by all means continue to I will continue to read and review.
person Sayge
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Ametank! Remember me? From Mediaminer.org? I used to review your stories! You are still great! Keep up with the good work and I have to say, this first chapter caused my heart to thump against my ribcage for good measure!
person Mandie
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is a really great fanfic. Ihave never read one like this before, and believe me I've read quiet a few of 'em. I hope you update soon!!
person Keo
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooohh.... sounds good so far!! Update soon- I really want ot know whats going to happen! I've never heard anything like this.. and the anst was a good touch. You write it well. By the way, the first demon you mentioned, with the ram horns and teeth- i'm not sure if you read it or even hear of it, but it sounds a bit like a Totetsu- from Petshop of Horrors. Ah well.
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Keep going!
person denise
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool, cool man, keep the good work up ok? you make my crappy days at school better again ^^v <---- peace sign
person Starcrossed
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bounces* DUDE!!!!!!! SWEEEEEEEET!!!!!!!! Continue please! I love it soo far. Update as soon as you can! Or else! *pauses* or not...
person Starcrossed
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...that was just a sad, gory chapter and I reviewed soo cheerfully...man...I soo need to work on my timing...Anyways! Like I said before, update!
person Tibbi
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mm-mm good ^_^ the second time around even *nodnod* i do love it so far ... so gruesomely wonderful... *sighs contently*