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for To Yield

by buenagirl

person kenshinjunkie03
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a very well written story that was good, sad, funny, and tragic but all together good. i loved it when i was so trapped in chapter one, i couldn't believe i was still on it. i love long chapters and long stories. it gives me something good to read. also, this story rocks!
person anubiset
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sappy, but overly so. It was the perfect way to do this and it was magical. It was like reading my first romance novel all over again. Only shorter. The way you wrote was elequent. I loved this.
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutely beautiful story. I loved it, keep up the good work
person Sayge
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was great!!!! You are the best author ever! That was just soooo beautiful!!!! I'm so happy right now that I'm crying!!!!!
person Kyoden
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was the most beautiful story I have ever read. Idk wat 2 say. It was perfect. Great plot and grammer. Great storyline. Great characterization. And GREAT lemons. Absolutly wonderful. One of the best stories I have ever read, period! Thank you for writing it.
person Supi-chan1026
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.... sooo cute! ^_^
I loved it! write more stories like this one please.

-courtney
person sirhcnotilih
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!

This is THE best Yusuke/Kurama I have read!

5 out of 5!
person Bakurah
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww! That was cute!
*Hugglez Shuichi!*
Hiei and Koenma I've never seen that done before heh they're cute!
*Hugs her Hiei Plushie*
person LittleKitsune
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Tears in eyes* I FRIGGIN LOVED IT!!!! Maybe the plots been done before, but WHO GIVES A FLYIN DAMN!!!! You descibed everything beautifully, and as I was reading this I couldn't stop. Even better that it was put up finished, but... damn, you've got wicked style. I cannot tell you how much i enjoyed the story. *Shaking head* Great AU, great pairing, great author, who did it right the first time. Need i ask for more?