rate_review Reviews

Wow. This story was amazing. You seemed to have the perfect mix of romance, comedy, and tragedy in this. The slight changes you made to everyone's characters really worked out for the best. I really loved the Yusuke/Shuichi and Hiei/Koenma relationships. The way you did chapter three, with both pairs making love, was great! I have no idea how you were able to alternate between the gentle and the practically S&M, but you did it wonderfully. Also, the ending was simply perfect, though you do have me wondering about Hiei a bit after that one. What kind of track record does he have?

Oh, while I'm thinking on it, I simply loved the perverted minds of Hiei and Koenma! They were just so great! I spent half the time they were in the story just laughing at them! And the end, where everyone was together, the possessiveness thing was perfect. You really did everything right with this one, including how everyone ended up a couple. Great job!!

OMG I LOVED YOUR STORY IT MADE ME CRY YOU'RE SUCH A GOOD WRITER!!! ^^ keep up the good work^^

Wow....you have some of the best lemon action i've ever read, and that's saying alot! I seriously need to go cool down. -fans self-

Well goodness! Yu Yu Hakusho and Alexander in the same chapter!? *waves flags* What a dream, dear. Just had to let you know. Now on to the next three chapters! *excitement* Ahoy!... Or is that more of a greeting? What's pirate for 'goodbye', then? Yar! That'll do... *snugs*

holy crap... that was the best story ever!!! your writing mesmorized me and has such passion. when i read it my heart and soul opened up. Your grammer and spelling were excellent. The story wasnt rushed (duh). If your thinking of doing writing for a living your probably going to be famous

Terrific! This was probably one of the best stories I've read in a long while. I simply love the plot, the good deal of suspence mixed with hot romance made for a steamy story. Keep it up.

There is only one word which can describe this story: AMAZING! *applades like crazy* You are posibly the best author I have seen on this site, keep up the wonderfull work.

so thats why its called To Yield.

This was one of the best YYH stories I have ever read! Could you possibly make a sequel? This story was wonderful, and so realistic! I'm happy Shu-chan got away before the matter became out of hand. I love the description of the character's feelings, that's the best part of the story! I love this fic and hope that you'll make a sequel to it!

Not only was this THE best Yusuke/Kurama story I beleive to ever have been written but I would even go so far as to say that this is one of the best stories EVER written nd that includes those of published writers and fan fic writers alike. It was so gripping and captivating my eyes watered on far too many occasions and even as I write this review I feel that cold lump choking me up. Your plot just drew me in and was kept paced and spellbinding and your characterizations were so dead on One would swear this could have been written by the original creator of the series. (disregarding the Yaoi factor) I loved every second of the angst and the humor and the Lemons..... The lemons I cant even begin to find wordss for them... let's just say I found myself drinking alot of ice cold water (and also using said water to throw on myself) at points in this story. I don't know what else to say other than you are a GREAT writer and I will DEFINITELY look out for any other fics you may write.

Simply Sublime!

Neko's Rate: 5 stars (though hardly enough)

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