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for UNDESTINED

by EmbersEye

person AnnaJAganshi
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't have any suggestions, but i like this! Great idea, it helps explain what these two were up too, in different kind of way. Post the next chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Tankar
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thats cute! It has a more 'realistic' [ as realistic as a anime can get ] look on their relationship, though a sad one. Its a shame this looks discontinued. I'd of liked for it to continue- its not everyday someone makes a story that fills in the gaps instead of extending the series, ne?
person LittleKitsune
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.....arrgg.... can't see... where... plot... is.. going... *holding head in pain* I HATE THAT! Update soon, relive me of the agony of not knowing, onegai? I love you writing style, and want to know BADLY what else happend 'behind the scene' of the Makai Tournament. ALSO... don't stop working on Well or Unbalanced Pendulum... i like the plot in those, and check for updates daily. (I'm one of those people who just started reviewing... didn't used to at all 'til i relized how unfair that was) Again- update at least ONE of your stories, pwease? *puppy eyes*