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for A Dream Come true

by HentaiAnn

schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is actually pretty good. The writing style is a little different but not bad. Believe me I've seen far worse and it looked like you had fun with your fox. :)
person Altar of Wishes
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay then.... that's better. Now people can actually read.
person Altar of Wishes
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear god. Seperate the paragraphs and use "" instead of (). Please.

Of course I'm assuming that you are an English speaking/writing person. If English isn't your native tongue, maybe we could trade lessons on the English language?