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This chapter was well worth the wait. Just don't take so long next time, some of need their fix. BAD MISTRESS! I loved the OC coming in to play. The entire set up was great for the orgy fest. Need smut since our little firefly is being a slacker, she knows who she is. You need to spank her I think. I can't wait to see what you'll come out with next. thanks for the update hun.

holy god that was the hottest thing i think i have ever read... hell i think i will ever read! your words made my imagination spark to show all four come... and adding sensui and Sniper! AMAZING TWIST you are one hell of a writer.. keep it up

::screams like a fangirl until she passes out:: ...uhm yay! ^.^ Thank you! I was so anxious to read your other story that I almost forgot to review this one. ::gives giant marshmallow:: Good job! Can't wait for the next one. Especially Hiei's and Kurama's reaction to what happens to Yusuke in the Demon's Cave... that was what it was called right? Anyway, can't wait.

Damn woman! Misty was telling me I wouldn't be disappointed and she was most certainly correct. I was hoping Jo would make a reappearance somewhere...I thought he was awfully cute. I loved seeing Hiei stand up for Jo too and of course Hiei would try to twist things in his mind just a little so that it wouldn't seem as if he cared about Jo as a person. *sigh* Poor little firebug and his pride. Ah well, I am sure that between Yusuke, Kurama and Jo he won't have many barriers left to speak of. The mansecks was hot as per usual.

Just a little note for you...if you don't absolutely abhor the Naruto fandom, there is a fic called D/s Naruto by Hestia that really takes a nosedive into the D/s world. There are all sorts of kink in that thing and I think you and Hestia should conference. Here's the link in case you're interested.

http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600092309

Oh My God!!! Gone forever and you pay us back with pure gold! Damn I've missed you and this story! That was all so damn hot! Ok so I'm in love with Jo and damand he stay in this story forever (but I get the feeling you already had that in mind). And as if your awsomness couldn't get better, right after thinking this story needed some action (well, a different kind of action anyway) and you lead us into the Chapter Black saga. You truely are greatness personofied! I can't wait for the next chapter but if it's a great as this one I'll probably wait forever without complaint.

Each time I read this my mind turns to mush again. I must say you outdid yourself yet again and I love the way you incorporated Jo and Hiei into this chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing how the payoff comes about for the bet they won, it should be quite steamy.

Sniper and Sensui's appearance was definitely a surprise, it should be interesting to see how that comes into play for future chapters. Wonderful job and thank you for allowing me to help you with certain aspects of this chapter. It was great fun.

Keep up the wonderful work!

Glah...Lost..To..Much...Blood...*Passes Out*

Touchmysoul just passed out from multiple nosebleeds. She wants you to know that she loves this chapter, and she can wait for the next chapter hoping that there will be more action with Jo & Hiei. She wants me to tell you that your her favorite author next SinkingIntoTheDarkness. Now I must leave so I can get my master a box of tissues..

~Touchmysoul~

O_O omg! this. chapter. was. so. fucking. hot. i. think. i need. a really really really cold shower. ^_^ its good to see ur back and well started to miss you there missy lol. well you came back with a vengence and i must say this chapter was fucking awesome man yo rawk! also thanks for reviewing my fic and im glad it made you feel a bit better. btw sensui? sniper? may i ask wat they were doing in a place lik that. wink wink lol. but yea through me for a loop and didnt see that coming...at all... well anyway im glad your back and great chapter. i. mean. damn. cold shower anyone...anyone...

its warm and summery,hope your feeling better and really hope to see some updates soon
I know it selfish of me but the story is great and I want more.

Um... the first three chapters are pretty nice, but you've got the terminology a little wrong, I'm afraid. A seme is simply the guy who is doing the penetrating, and an uke is the one who is being penetrated. That's all there is to it. It relates to the gay terms "top" and "bottom" correspondingly, but it is not an equivalent of BDSM dynamic of dom/sub or master/slave. Otherwise every woman would be considered a submissive partner simply because she is on the receiving end of the cock.
Put a little warning up, ok? For the unsuspecting readers who read a few conventional chapters and then suddenly get plunged into a Master/slave BDSM relationship including humiliation fetish, discipline, pain techniques and etc. Thank you. :)