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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hot as always
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaay! *Does the happy happy updated fic dance.* I've been stalking this fic for a bit, and couldn't believe it when I saw it had been updated! And yes, it was most definitely worth the wait. Wow. I think I need several cold showers after this, and possibly an ice bath for my brain. ^__^ I hope they keep Jo, he's a sweetie (in a sexy, smutty sort of way). *cuddles him* I'm also wondering (though I doubt you'll tell me) if he'll find out about what they do when they're not bonking each other silly, and especially if he'll meet Youko. *g* Just to see how he finds out, and his reaction. Then again, maybe his former Master was a demon and he'll just be like "Yeah, whatever." Okay, sorry, shutting up now. :-P Well, almost. Yay for helpers! *huggles you all* And hope it updates again soon, especially with the evil teasing ending to this chapter! XD
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O *dies* Oh my gosh, this was too freakin hot! I don't know how you did it, but oh my gosh!!! I'm pretty sure I read through this thing twice. Not completely sure because I think my brain turned into mush about halfway through. You are too good for you own good.
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my freaking god, you are the god of yaoi, lemon and fanfiction in general. this story is so awesome i cound'y get enough of it. you truly have a very creative, perverted, and talented mind and imagination. Awesome work though. :D
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where the fuck do I begin with this chapter? How about an overall analysis of the great fucking lines:
"and hours of playing hide the snake in various locations and positions." Hahahahaha...hide the snake.
"Yeah, well, you better be puttin’ something on that’s uncomfortable and really gay, too!" And may I just say that the outfits you have them in are motor-burning material. Really, Kurama with the glitter and the NAIL POLISH. Hiei's reaction was priceless, of course, as was this line:
"Kurama was showing off a neon arrow pointing to his crotch saying ‘beat this, bitches.’" For weeks I would think "beat this bitches" and then snicker to myself.
Heh, I loved the bouncer hitting on Kurama and teasing him because he's a pretty bottom boy. Speaking of which, when Yusuke is punishing Kurama at the bar, and the guys looking on are shouting things, when one of them said: “Bottom bitches that pretty need a firm hand!”, I popped a gasket laughing, that's another line I still snicker over. And the cuffs being thrown at them from everywhere? Brilliant.
The image of Yusuke and Kurama grinding all over each other and frenching was mad hot. And although I do not like OCs, you executed Jo's character brillantly. You keep him perfectly submissive, and use him more as a plot point, a way to bring the lemon to new heights. Because you couldn't have that contest without a fourth, and there's no one in the cast who could play Jo's role adequately. Loved it. And it was awesome that Jo won the contest over Kurama...sometimes the fox needs an ego check.
Then we get to the smexing. Let me say that anytime Hiei and Yusuke would kiss as they were playing with their *cough* toys, I started sweating. You just write so damn hot that sometimes I can't think. I love how your mind works. And really, the positions...Hiei working Yusuke's ass and making him come early cracked me up. That's so Hiei. And I love how you have Yusuke refer to Kurama's ass as his fox hole ajgdkagkdgkakbs. But that lemon...BITCH YOU CRAZY. *bows* And what I love about your lemons is that you give and give and give - not only do you have pages of foreplay, but then a contest, and then fucking in position one, then position two, then position three...somewhere in there piles of brains are lost for I'm sure I wasn't the only one losing my mind.
And adding Sensui and Sniper to the end was sheer genius.
EVERYONE LISTEN....KHL WRITES THE PORN. DON'T DOUBT IT. SHE OWNS ALL OF YOU.
"and hours of playing hide the snake in various locations and positions." Hahahahaha...hide the snake.
"Yeah, well, you better be puttin’ something on that’s uncomfortable and really gay, too!" And may I just say that the outfits you have them in are motor-burning material. Really, Kurama with the glitter and the NAIL POLISH. Hiei's reaction was priceless, of course, as was this line:
"Kurama was showing off a neon arrow pointing to his crotch saying ‘beat this, bitches.’" For weeks I would think "beat this bitches" and then snicker to myself.
Heh, I loved the bouncer hitting on Kurama and teasing him because he's a pretty bottom boy. Speaking of which, when Yusuke is punishing Kurama at the bar, and the guys looking on are shouting things, when one of them said: “Bottom bitches that pretty need a firm hand!”, I popped a gasket laughing, that's another line I still snicker over. And the cuffs being thrown at them from everywhere? Brilliant.
The image of Yusuke and Kurama grinding all over each other and frenching was mad hot. And although I do not like OCs, you executed Jo's character brillantly. You keep him perfectly submissive, and use him more as a plot point, a way to bring the lemon to new heights. Because you couldn't have that contest without a fourth, and there's no one in the cast who could play Jo's role adequately. Loved it. And it was awesome that Jo won the contest over Kurama...sometimes the fox needs an ego check.
Then we get to the smexing. Let me say that anytime Hiei and Yusuke would kiss as they were playing with their *cough* toys, I started sweating. You just write so damn hot that sometimes I can't think. I love how your mind works. And really, the positions...Hiei working Yusuke's ass and making him come early cracked me up. That's so Hiei. And I love how you have Yusuke refer to Kurama's ass as his fox hole ajgdkagkdgkakbs. But that lemon...BITCH YOU CRAZY. *bows* And what I love about your lemons is that you give and give and give - not only do you have pages of foreplay, but then a contest, and then fucking in position one, then position two, then position three...somewhere in there piles of brains are lost for I'm sure I wasn't the only one losing my mind.
And adding Sensui and Sniper to the end was sheer genius.
EVERYONE LISTEN....KHL WRITES THE PORN. DON'T DOUBT IT. SHE OWNS ALL OF YOU.
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say to chapter 10 is"WOW" and what a henti imagination you have (thank gd)I can't wait for chapter 11 to start already.Just to see Hiei explore the master feelings he is have for Joe,plus the weekend should be alot of fun if not interrupted.What happens to poor Joe when he finds out that all 3 are demons and have alot a beings after them.And after all that would Hiei really concider keeping Joe at least while he's in the human plane.Wow,I'm on the edge of my seat for the next update. A very very nice job
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! So glad you are out of hibernation, and with another GREAT chapter. Today is my B-DAY 31st of July and I couldn't have asked for a better present, since everyone I know is working today. Enough about me though, great chapter, can't wait for the rest. I wish I could write like you. Keep it up and update soon!!!
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter!! i loved it!!
Also what were Sensui & Sniper doing in the back room? ^_-
hahahhahaha, nah, jk.
update soon!!
Also what were Sensui & Sniper doing in the back room? ^_-
hahahhahaha, nah, jk.
update soon!!
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liked it
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whee...Jo got to have lots of fun! Hooray! *grins*
#1 problem in living in a studio apartment with someone else who is not a sexual partner: Reading really really really hot...wow...at least there's the hand held shower massager....
Yeah, hot...brain all melty around my chair...err.r..I think it's brain...
Much love!
#1 problem in living in a studio apartment with someone else who is not a sexual partner: Reading really really really hot...wow...at least there's the hand held shower massager....
Yeah, hot...brain all melty around my chair...err.r..I think it's brain...
Much love!