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all I can say is... wow... that chapter was amazing, and dammit it's hot in here now! Keep up the good work, can't wait to see the next chapter

That's how any Fan Fiction should be written. It was just wonderful, I loved it. I really can't wait for other chapters, and I know they'll be just as awesome.

hey! i'm baaaaack! and let me tell you! (picks self up off of floor) i just copied and pasted and i am going to get right to work on that for you, ne? (any excuse to reread it!) this is really hot and really real. i love it!

(off to beta now...)

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf

Once again, you have outdone yourself.
Your elaboration on the lemon scene was just fucking awesome.
I liked the way you had Yusuke and Keiko to figure things out. I believe it would go down like that, with a simple kiss. If theres passion then you hit it on the mark.
I can't wait until Yusuke fucks or makes love to Kurama, that will be truly interesting to read.
Well look foward to more.
When I say more I mean an update and more stories.

- only thing seen....was a mysterious dark figure...-

Hey, it's me! Sorry I haven't been in contact, but I've had a few... problems! Sorry! But now I'm back! Well, this chapter was well worth the wait, I must say! You are one of the best writers out there, and I mean it. Keep it up and I totally understand about how long it took to update (trust me). Gret job! I'll be in touch soon!

that was the best chapter in my life.the lemon was great.im glad yusuke was uke.the next chapter is when yusuke takes kurame right.this story is great.pleae uodate soon.i just luv this coupling.^_____^

i love ur story, please update soon, oh , and do you think there can be a yusuke/kurama/hiei threesome.

I can't believe I missed your update. Hehehe. Maybe I should be looking at aff.net more often. Anyways, good chapter. I like the way you potrayed Yusuke's uncertaincy and reaction to Kurama's seduction. Normally, I'm not a big fan of Keiko, but I liked her role in this fic. In some of the fics I've read with the Yus/Kur, she's more than likely there to be Kurama's rival for Yusuke's affection. It's about time she supported his decisions. As for the lemon, XP a horny and impatient Yusuke was fun to read. My fave line was the part about him kicking Kurama out of bed if his dick was in Yusuke's ass while they slept. XD Keep up the good work.

~Chibi Wingzero~

I am in awe of you! You are a totally awesome writer. I am so jealous right now that I'm ashamed to write. That story was unbelievable! The sex scenes were incredible and mindblowing! Extremely well written. Now I have to take a cold shower just to have a peaceful night's sleep. PLEASE update soon!

Yummy Kurama/Yusuke action, more soon please. Also, can you take the story into the Sensui story line. Can just imagine Kurama's reactions at having his lover dead, and then returned to him.