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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Does this mean that chapter four is coming soon? I need to cheer up really fast... I skipped school today because I was feeling bad again. I don't skip school often either. One more lemon please? Kurama¤Yusuke? *watery eyes* The stuff at FFN isn't sustaining me very well.
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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: Awwww, Yusuke shutting Kurama up with a kiss. That was so cool. You write the longest lemons. I just love foreplay and you write plenty of it. Ahhh, the way the fox made Yusuke writhe! Delicious. I could only hope to do as well. It was nice of Keiko to help Yusuke out like that. I can literally imagine Kurama jumping up and down in his mind saying, 'Yippeee, Yusuke wants me!" That was too cute. I really like this story and your writing. Hopefully, I'll learn from it.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1:
Ah, such a wonderful chapter. I hadn't read it since you made your changes. So much more detail. It was wonderful. You are so friggin' good with the limes and lemons. I'm jealous! Your writing is taking on a more romantic quality. I like that. You have such a great vocabulary too; makes me wonder if I'm ever going regain mine. I'll read chapter two tomorrow. Can't wait to see what you added.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Ah, such a wonderful chapter. I hadn't read it since you made your changes. So much more detail. It was wonderful. You are so friggin' good with the limes and lemons. I'm jealous! Your writing is taking on a more romantic quality. I like that. You have such a great vocabulary too; makes me wonder if I'm ever going regain mine. I'll read chapter two tomorrow. Can't wait to see what you added.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn botan she always has bad timing i was enjoying what was about to happen. man yusuke was going to ride kurama now that would have been sweet if botan*growls* didn't come and intrupt. maybe i'll get to see yusuke riding kurama in the next chapter *wish, hope for that to happen*. you know if he does that he still uke but he is also in control maybe he could ride kurama and order kurama not to cum until he says so *drools at thought*. god im such a hentai
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn it! why'd you leave it like that. damn it! this is on of my favorite pairings (the others being yoko/kuronue, kurama/karasu) so please update soon. and don't leave me like that dammit!
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa....that was awsome!!! i have never read a fanfiction that good!!!! please keep updating!!!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still like Yoko but oh well... that was a sexAy chapter! (oh yes, intentional spelling of sexy... I read the wet series at FFN and it stuck in my mind) I think what would be next in your FF writing career is a little Yusuke and Kurama one-shot romances or angsts... ^___^; I like angst.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful! It's a good thing Kurama knows how to manipulate people or Yusuke would be uke forever. Who wouldn't want to be with such a talented seme as Kurama ^_~. Not just the content was great but you're writting is fantastic. I'm not much of a Yusuke/Kurama fan, but I'm getting there now. Much Kudos.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww man. Stupid Botan. lol. Another nice lemon. Very sexy. Yusuke seme is guna b awesome. Although Kurama seme is awesome too. I hope u continue this story for a very long time. It is awesome. YusukexKurama yahhhhh!!!!!! And thanx again 4 the good grammer and stuff!