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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please post more!!!!
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE!
-Mia >_<
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE!
-Mia >_<
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell yeah! This story rocks. I love it. I can't wait to read the next chapter! ^_^
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job! UPDATE uPDATE
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great begining for a story and I can't wait for the update.I liked that Yuske didn't want to be babied and could handle the rough
stuff in bed so that the demon in Kurama could and can still come out to play some.Nicely done so far,although I think you should leave
any and all thanks to the reviewers at the end of the chapters and not the begining.
stuff in bed so that the demon in Kurama could and can still come out to play some.Nicely done so far,although I think you should leave
any and all thanks to the reviewers at the end of the chapters and not the begining.
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it'll be fun to see Yusuke be the dominate inthe bedroom for a while and to see just how sub Kurama is willing to take it
as well.On the edge of my seat waiting............Update soon
as well.On the edge of my seat waiting............Update soon
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This has to be one of the best Yuskue/Kurama fics! It's so hot! I can't wait till the next chapter.
~*Hayla*~
ps: I have my own Yusuke/Kurama story if you want to check it out (it's no where near as good as yours though)
~*Hayla*~
ps: I have my own Yusuke/Kurama story if you want to check it out (it's no where near as good as yours though)
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3:
It was so cute when Kurama had to point out to Yusuke that it was the only sex he'd ever had. I can see how Yusuke would have doubts and it was so sad when Kurama realized it. Your description of both characters is very detailed. Damn! Just when we get to see Yusuke start to fulfill Kurama's fantasy, you go and interrupt it. Bad Koi, Bad Koi. No cookie for you!
I'm working on the Koga/Sess. It's slow going. I have to work late all this week, so it will take some time to finish chapter six. Can't wait for your next chappie!
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
It was so cute when Kurama had to point out to Yusuke that it was the only sex he'd ever had. I can see how Yusuke would have doubts and it was so sad when Kurama realized it. Your description of both characters is very detailed. Damn! Just when we get to see Yusuke start to fulfill Kurama's fantasy, you go and interrupt it. Bad Koi, Bad Koi. No cookie for you!
I'm working on the Koga/Sess. It's slow going. I have to work late all this week, so it will take some time to finish chapter six. Can't wait for your next chappie!
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3:
BTW, the shower scene was too hot. What are you trying to do, kill us! As always, the description is perfection. It deserves its own review. I love the way Kurama tortured Yusuke, and that's what he did, tortured him! Such a great scene, solid, almost real enough to role around on the tongue tasting the shower water, Yusuke's skin, feeling through Kurama's hands. You make us feel, see, taste, and smell it. Awesome. *shiver* I'm getting hot just thinking about it.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
BTW, the shower scene was too hot. What are you trying to do, kill us! As always, the description is perfection. It deserves its own review. I love the way Kurama tortured Yusuke, and that's what he did, tortured him! Such a great scene, solid, almost real enough to role around on the tongue tasting the shower water, Yusuke's skin, feeling through Kurama's hands. You make us feel, see, taste, and smell it. Awesome. *shiver* I'm getting hot just thinking about it.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn Botan. Alway at the wrong time. I love this fic its so awsome. I think Yusuke and Kurama are a perfect couple and this fic just proves it. I also like the length of you chapters. The lemons were wonderfully long and kami... can you say sexy? There were times I was quite literally on the edge of my seat. And okay I'm not a guy but I think I need a cold shower after reading that. Thank you for such an enjoyable story and i hope you update soon.
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another wonderful chapter! You write so well, and the chapters get hotter and hotter! You, my dear, have a special talent not seen in most people: every chapter you have something new! Now that is creative!
You go girl! *Waves arms in the air and cheers*
Look'n forward to the next chapter. Keep it up!
Oh, FF deleted myaccount - I'll talk to you more about that in a e-mail.
Keep up the good work!
You go girl! *Waves arms in the air and cheers*
Look'n forward to the next chapter. Keep it up!
Oh, FF deleted myaccount - I'll talk to you more about that in a e-mail.
Keep up the good work!