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wow... well, I have no words, really... but... wow... :) You must be a really cool mom... I have to tell you, that despite writing smutty fanfiction myself, I'd be absolutely horrified if my own daughter suggested that we 'co-author' something together. And if my own mother were to suggest such a thing, I would probably have a stroke from the sheer shock of it. So, kudos to you. This chapter was... er... interesting :). I could definately see Yusuke playing that role... I didn't really care for his referring to Kurama as a 'slut' - I thought that was a bit degrading, even in play - but the rest of it was pretty sexy. As for bringing in Hiei? That's your call and I'm sure you can make it work. --julie

0___0; Hey! That was all right to me! It long and drawn out which makes me happy! I only wish that the chapter was part 1 oout of 2 or 3 or 4... ^____^; Oh things that detective does with his mouth! *spazzes out* Yeah I read the Wet series.... so? It was kinds of scary when I first read it. I guesss because I was innocent about "yaoi and teh other gay stuff" you know? *runs off with her Yusuke and Kurama make out dolls*

Oh wow! This chapter was incredible, you did a spectacular job on it. Well worth the wait, the Master/Slave setup is to die for. *Fans self for several long moments* Where's the boyfriend figure when I need him dammit lol Hiei's reaction was particularly amusing, I would have no objections whatsoever to him joining in. I'd love to see the scene you would write in fact. I beg of you, please update soon! I wish I had your talent for writing lemons, but alas mine will probably never be this good. Who knows maybe one of these days I'll try my hand at a yaoi fic and see if that helps any ;-)

My favorite chapter was the 1st, the slow seduction of the unsuspecting Yusuke. I liked the insite you gave to both characters in dealing with there feelings. Your story heated up quickly from there. I would love to see Hiei added to the relationship.

That was so fucking hot!! I hate to sound uncouth, but that's the only word that comes to mind to describe this chapter. From now on I need to have a sponge handy when I read your story. A dominant Yusuke and a submissive Kurama what more can a person want? I loved this chapter! I wouldn't mind seeing Hiei thrown into the mix (hint, hint ^_^)

Ohhhh, that's funny. Y'know, that was a VERY good chappie; I most definitely approve. I'm becoming addicted to this story. What would be very interesting is seeing something with, say, sweet foods or something. Or one with games, simple games we played when we were little. I'd also very much like to see Kurama live out the little fantasy he mentioned in the latest chappie about tying up Yusuke with his vines and ravishing him. Of course, it's all up to you; I'm just throwing out little suggestions. Update soon! Luvvies.

hell yeah the lemon was so kinky i didn't think yusuke would get be so dominant so fast and hell yeah you have to add hiei. i nice yummy fire demon will always spice things up

that... was... HOTTT! Oh man that was definiately worth the wait. OF COURSE I enjoyed chapter 4! LOLS Oh man such a submissive Kurama, I mean I wouldn't lie, if i had a penis I couldn't help myself from wanting to have Kurama either... Okay that was a weird comment. You can ignore it. HAHAA. HIEI! I love his last line... OOOHEHE. Stop it Hiei, KOOKEKE> =]

Damn girl. That was the most incredible lemon I've ever read. The whole slave/master thing was awesome. I've readed the first two chapter before and did't have enough time seeing the updates but the wait was worth. And also I don't mind bringing Hiei into the mixing, not only is Kurama/Yusuke my favorite pairing, also Hiei/Yusuke and Hiei/Kurama, just call me crazy but I have a crazy mind. Can't wait for the next chapter and to see what happens next. You are doing a great job by the way. :) smiley

You see, I only review when there's a new chapter... I don't want anyone to see me doing this but... *gets down on her hands and knees* Pleaaaaaaaaaaaase update! *returns to normal* Okay. I did it.