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for The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke

by kogaluver

person Athena
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome....I so want more, please please give me more. Is there going to be a scene with Hiei and Yusuke? I hope so. I absolutly love this fic. I love the stuff kurama did with all the plants. I absolutly loved yusuke's dominence. and i cant believe he made kurama lose conciousness! it ws execlent. did hiei watch kurama get it? It would be awsome if he ghad been masterbating while watching those two. lol.

I need the next chappi, please!!!!!!!!!!!
person \'Jita
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!!! That was...wow! Fantastic! Toe curling sex scene for sure!!! My GOD is Yusuke sexy in that role, exactly how I imagine he would be... *pants* I'm seriously having an episode over here, I think I'm hyperventelating..... *fans self furiously* Not to mention the drool all over my keybard! DAMN that was hot!!! And Hiei, oh HELL yeah! That would be so freakin' sexy I'd prolly end up needing some ice, several fans and oxygen!!! lol ^_^ Oh PLEASE put him in there with them, pretty please?! Those three are just meant for each other and would be unbelievably sexy together!!! "fucked him unconsious" heh, heh... Damn... I'm impressed too! (and extremely envious) AWESOME, FANTASTIC, SUPERB, HELL OF A JOB!!! THANK YOU ^_^
person Hayla C.
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated! And might I say that was very, very hott! I liked the whole 'master' idea lol. But, I think you should just have Kurama and Yusuke in this fic. Don't get me wrong, I love those three, but I think I like the way it's going with just the two. But anyways, can't wait for the next updated (:

~Hayla
person June Briefs
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT CHAPTER, but... PLEASE! Don't put Hiei between Yusuke & Kurama. No way! ;__;
person comicfancat
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow what a great chapter,long winded no way baby a good lemon takes time and your good at writting them.Adding Hiei might be fun yet Kurama and Yusuke still have some discovering to do on their own yet I would think.Although having him to talk to for both Yusuke and Kurama could lead to some interesting insights from Hiei to both of them.Can't wait for Kurama to wake up maybe in his bed with Yusuke holding him?
Update soon pleeeease!
person ShadowofLight
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh gods i laughed when yusuke thought he killed kurama. ooh what a way to go!! ROFL and how can you not add hiei? i mena he's there, he seems ready so go for it! for someone as inexperience as Yusuke he certainly knows how to play the master role really well. i love your fic so plz more lemony smut!!
person youkaiblood
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing!! i couldn't even peal my eyes away from the screen!!!
person hinshihoushi
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fast became one of my favorite YYH fics with the first chapter. Love the pairing and very well written. I vote to just keep it between the two. Even though love threesomes between these three characters, it just seems that adding Hiei into the relationship would counter what you were initially going for. Although that doesn't mean that Hiei can't try. Thanks for continuing the story
person kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in)
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just how i love my lemons: hot, sexy, hardcore, and just woah. i'm speechless. but there is one thing, i'm sick of hiei always getting kurama. if you add him in the mix, then it better be a long ass lemon with hot guy sex all the way. and please locate them back to kurama's place.

p.s. for that kurama/karasu fic, can you make it as good as this one with uber long lemons. and karasu as uber bitch/slut/uke of the year. and put a camera in there and have the tape leak out to yusuke and hiei. and then have them confront karasu and kurama for a very hot foursome^_^V
person nishigirl
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I think you should add Hiei, but maybe after Kurama wakes up. Threesomes are always the best!