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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good although i wouldn't mind a yoko kurama appearence.And i'm not a huge hiei fan.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, I reviewed this ficcie on 'nfiction', and my sentiments are the same. Very good story. I have no idea where you come up with some of the lewd ^_~ dialogue for the sexual situations, but that always means there's some spark of genius the writer has that always makes those novel notions work. I swear I'm a geek, and I'm not knowledgeable about certain things of the sensual genre, but your fics (including the Koga/Inuyasha one) are so exceptionally naughty they're exceptionally good. Keep up the good work. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for any new stories you may write.
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the 4th chappie, I was practically drooling at the end. please update !!!
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!!!!
Bravo!!!
more more
hie
would be nice
but its aslo fine the way it is
this is good enough to be a published romance novel
please please please update soon
Bravo!!!
more more
hie
would be nice
but its aslo fine the way it is
this is good enough to be a published romance novel
please please please update soon
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should add Hiei.. It would be the perfect little sex triangle if you add Hiei into the mix...
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm really glad someone is putting a justice to the kurama/yusuke pairing! they're my favorite. i just luv yusuke, hes a fine piece of ass, as well as sex on a stick. i love versitile men. lol. great chaps. update soon. and i think it would be fun to throw in a little hiei ass into the mix. whoever said threes a crowd didnt put into account hiei/yusuke/kurama in a steamy hot threesome. udate soon. really enjoy'n the story!!
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! *nose bleeds* You really made my day with this story!! And answering your question...yes, put Hiei in the mix!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read!!!XD~~~~~~ ja ne!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! this is a really good story just like your "When Kagom's away Demons will Play" i read that one a long time ago. i think you should add hiei!! he's so fucking hot and so is yusuke and kurama!! the only person i don't think is hot out of the team is kuwabara *eww!* he's just funny and that's all. i love yusuke's dominant side *drool* when i was reading what he was saying somehow his voice turned into inuyasha's...which is weird @.@ but anyway anyway please update soon!!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4
Your words create detailed pictures in our minds. There is no confusion, allowing us to easily follow the motion taking place in the story. You do not take the lazy way out, taking your time to describe with varied verbs and nouns. I am in awe of your vocabulary.
He was finally sampling Kurama’s perfect, flawless body and had no intentions of stopping.
Burrowing his lips into the crook of Kurama’s neck
disentangled themselves
Kurama, beyond irritated, narrowed his eyes as he unlocked and abruptly slid the window open.
Spilling her head first into the fox demon’s bedroom.
A shock wave of heat pooled between Yusuke’s thighs. (I can almost feel it myself)
As he focused on Kurama’s, come hither, stare,
“Don’t! This is my show,” admonished the teen.
And that’s just the beginning of the chapter.
Kurama and Yusuke’s characters are so contrasting and you do it so well; Yusuke, the dominant punk and Kurama, the submissive with the knowledge to play an awesome uke.
You paint Yusuke well as the dominant with the ‘dirty talk’. He’s such a hentai, even in his thoughts. Yet, he is at one point unsure of his role.
He wanted to take charge but wasn’t sure how far his fox was willing to let him control their lovemaking. After all, Kurama’s dominant sexual prowess and expertise was quite intimidating for a novice in the art of sex.
“Now, lick it off, slut. Taste what’ll be flowing down your throat soon,” ordered Yusuke.
“I think you want it down and dirty don’t you my little fox slut,” snickered one extremely horny spirit detective.
“I’ll give you what you want, slave, but you’ll have to earn it.” (Who wouldn’t die to have Kurama for a slave?)
Kurama is the perfect uke, eager, aniticipatory, obedient. As always, a three dimensional moving painting.
“Use me, punish me, fuck me, do what ever you want. Please, Yusuke.”
“It would be my pleasure…master. My only desire is to please you,” answered Kurama in a submissive tone, eyes lowered.
“Please, please,” panted Kurama, writhing in desperation.
The lines you give them are absolutely wonderful.
Your lemons are always detailed to the point it is almost like being there. What can I say? Showers all around. You cover everything and make it so sensual, seductive, hot, steamy, graphic, smutty…I could go on and on. If I started quoting, I wouldn’t want to stop. I didn’t see the draw to seeing saliva drip from a cock to someone’s mouth until I read this. Now it makes sense.
As always, I never cease to be amazed by your vocabulary.
The battle scene is great. The creatures and battle movements are so well described, one can’t help but see it in the mind. If I were to take clips, I’d have to put in the entire scene.
The ending was priceless. Yusuke fucked Kurama into oblivion. He’s in a panic. Kurama just had the best sex of his really long life. Wonder what he’ll be thinking when he wakes up? Hiei gets a good laugh. LOL
Congratulations on another great chapter. Can’t wait to see what you will do with the next. Oh, I really do want to see some reaction from Kurama concerning Yusuke’s prowess. I also would like to see him play out the role of slave on a more basic level, even outside the lemons, like a love sick puppy. *snicker* I know that there is a difference of opinion on bringing Hiei into the picture. I’m such a hentai, let’s have all three of them join in! Between Hiei and Yusuke, Kurama would really have fun playing slave! Just thinking about it is making me breathless.
I’m really looking forward to your next chapter, koibito. Love ya,
Ja
Your words create detailed pictures in our minds. There is no confusion, allowing us to easily follow the motion taking place in the story. You do not take the lazy way out, taking your time to describe with varied verbs and nouns. I am in awe of your vocabulary.
He was finally sampling Kurama’s perfect, flawless body and had no intentions of stopping.
Burrowing his lips into the crook of Kurama’s neck
disentangled themselves
Kurama, beyond irritated, narrowed his eyes as he unlocked and abruptly slid the window open.
Spilling her head first into the fox demon’s bedroom.
A shock wave of heat pooled between Yusuke’s thighs. (I can almost feel it myself)
As he focused on Kurama’s, come hither, stare,
“Don’t! This is my show,” admonished the teen.
And that’s just the beginning of the chapter.
Kurama and Yusuke’s characters are so contrasting and you do it so well; Yusuke, the dominant punk and Kurama, the submissive with the knowledge to play an awesome uke.
You paint Yusuke well as the dominant with the ‘dirty talk’. He’s such a hentai, even in his thoughts. Yet, he is at one point unsure of his role.
He wanted to take charge but wasn’t sure how far his fox was willing to let him control their lovemaking. After all, Kurama’s dominant sexual prowess and expertise was quite intimidating for a novice in the art of sex.
“Now, lick it off, slut. Taste what’ll be flowing down your throat soon,” ordered Yusuke.
“I think you want it down and dirty don’t you my little fox slut,” snickered one extremely horny spirit detective.
“I’ll give you what you want, slave, but you’ll have to earn it.” (Who wouldn’t die to have Kurama for a slave?)
Kurama is the perfect uke, eager, aniticipatory, obedient. As always, a three dimensional moving painting.
“Use me, punish me, fuck me, do what ever you want. Please, Yusuke.”
“It would be my pleasure…master. My only desire is to please you,” answered Kurama in a submissive tone, eyes lowered.
“Please, please,” panted Kurama, writhing in desperation.
The lines you give them are absolutely wonderful.
Your lemons are always detailed to the point it is almost like being there. What can I say? Showers all around. You cover everything and make it so sensual, seductive, hot, steamy, graphic, smutty…I could go on and on. If I started quoting, I wouldn’t want to stop. I didn’t see the draw to seeing saliva drip from a cock to someone’s mouth until I read this. Now it makes sense.
As always, I never cease to be amazed by your vocabulary.
The battle scene is great. The creatures and battle movements are so well described, one can’t help but see it in the mind. If I were to take clips, I’d have to put in the entire scene.
The ending was priceless. Yusuke fucked Kurama into oblivion. He’s in a panic. Kurama just had the best sex of his really long life. Wonder what he’ll be thinking when he wakes up? Hiei gets a good laugh. LOL
Congratulations on another great chapter. Can’t wait to see what you will do with the next. Oh, I really do want to see some reaction from Kurama concerning Yusuke’s prowess. I also would like to see him play out the role of slave on a more basic level, even outside the lemons, like a love sick puppy. *snicker* I know that there is a difference of opinion on bringing Hiei into the picture. I’m such a hentai, let’s have all three of them join in! Between Hiei and Yusuke, Kurama would really have fun playing slave! Just thinking about it is making me breathless.
I’m really looking forward to your next chapter, koibito. Love ya,
Ja
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, talk about another awesome story of yours. I loved your Inuyasha one. You have a way of making the words and action spring to life right before the readers eyes. I love it!! I would also love to see you throw Hiei into the mix. It would be great!! Keep up the great work. I can't wait until you update.