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::wipes drool from lip:: that was soo hott! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Well... aint Hiei the perverted little voyeuristic creep :). I think he'd be okay to add to the pairing for a one off, one shot deal, but not as a permanent fixture in thier relationship. Personally, I *hate* hiei/kurama pairings with a passion. Hiei/Yusuke is v.v. hot though, so if you do write it, if you could make it so hiei was more fixated on yusuke than the fox I think it could be really hot. That is, of course, if you could get Kurama to agree to it. Perhaps he might like to watch? Or better yet, you could make a Yusuke sandwich...

I love the way you write lemons. They are so very raw and powerful and there is a sense of urgency to your writing that can be felt by the reader. You definately have the nitty gritty logistics of yaoi lemons downpat.

Great job, and can't wait for your next update!

Julie

damn women that was hot i can't wait for hiei to be kurama and yusuke bitch for the day. there isn't anything better then a demons rutting and becoming one anothers bitch for the day.

Urrg... no Hiei. At least, no Hiei or Kurama together. What made me like this fic was that there wasn't a traditional and utterly boring pairing (though Kurama¤anyone is kind of pushing it). I still like it, but the whole Yusuke¤Kurama thing is sort of ruined though.

The makeout dolls? *giggles* Not tellin' ya anything.

yay an update and i love it!! hehehe, hiei wants to be yusuke's bitch!! XDDD hopefully there will be a threesome sometimes soon!! XP hail the pervyness!! UPDATE SOON!!

please update, i love ur story, and yes bring H into it.

that was HOTT!! i tell you, freaking awesome!! i like the ending with hiei showing up and the 'very impressive' was a nice touch!! yusuke fucked kuruma unconcious, that's skill!! XDDD UPDATE SOON!!!

please update soon i'm interested in how your going to incoperate hiei

I would like to see Hiei added to the mix if u don't mind. I'm not sure If ur still writting for this story, but If u r I would like to see what could happen next with Hiei involved.

Holy shit dude...I think I just creamed my pants...that was...fuck...I can't think. Um...wow....okay...um....yeah, still can't think. This might be a problem in the future for me...um...nope, still can't think. Okay...yeah...Hiei good...as long as Yusuke's still seme. It'd be cool to have Hiei in a uke position, acting like a bitch in heat, which I think Yusuke could make him do. But...damn girl...fucking update faster! lol...fuck...I uh...I just lost all thought process....


Good times and rock on,

Dom