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for The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke

by kogaluver

person cillaxox
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a good thing I don't need my mouth to type otherwise I wouldn't be able to get this review out. Really sexy chapter!! I especially liked Hiei masturbating! I don't believe there is anything sexier than that fire demon pleasuring himself...unless it's Hiei being fucked by Yusuke ^_~ Yes I am looking forward to that chapter. Awesome chapter and I can't wait until the next one.
person night_tigres
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoy Chapter 5 you say. I freaking LOVED it!!! You are so awesome at writing I can actually see it happening in my mind. That's what I love about reading your stories. *Sits and waits for the threesome or chapter 6, whichever is first* Trust me I'm a patient person. Don't leave us hanging too long. Thanks again for the great chapter. Keep up the Great work.
person youkaiblood
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm so glad you updated!!! i love reading your fic! i think this is my new favorite chapter ^^ you did very good with it =3
person Dominic Shade
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was prepared this time! No ordinary underwear for me! I bought DIAPERS! You know...really helps with leakage problems brought on by hot, kinky, sweaty, intense, man-sex...fuck...now I can't think again...shit! This got me in trouble at work...I just kept starin' at people in a daze...and drawin' rather lude picts. of Kurama and Yusuke goin' at it...my boss caught me when I was drawin' in Hiei...-.-'...can you imagine that conversation?

Oi...anyway...yay Hiei sex! ...*blanks*...Mmmm...Hiei...sex...AND NOW I CAN'T FUCKIN' THINK AGAIN!


Good times and rock on,

Dom
person Diane
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY HOT!!! Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Hope you have fun on your trip.
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you do very well with your story. I seen the update on this and immediately was bombared with questions of why exactly I had this huge, perverted grin on my face. Ermm, hard explaining that one since I'm the only anime lover here lol This chapter was very, very good. Hiei is a shameless pervert, I love it. Creepy and oddly sexy is a good way to describe him. I can't wait to read the threesome that you are planning, it's sure to be very steamy. Somehow I just knew that Hiei was a voyuer, it suits him lol I'm curious as to if he was watching their latest performance through the window.

Now I'm wondering exactly how much trouble Yusuke just got himself into with his comment about Hiei. Certainly the way he said it could lead to a very bad assumption on Kurama's part. Hopefully Kurama doesn't flip out too badly though I know if it was me Yusuke would be pinned to the bed while I dragged the answers of what he meant by that out of him forcibly lol.

Perhaps I shall attempt my hand at a yaoi pairing though honestly I have no idea who it would be between. Hmm perhaps I will have to come up with another crossover and have a three way with Kagome, Hiei and Kurama. Or perhaps her, Kurama and Kuronue. Oh the possibilities. I'm sure Kagome would enjoy the show the guys could put on for her *Contemplates the idea for a while*

Until next time, I'm off to reread this chapter again.. and again.. lol Update soon please!
person ShadowofLight
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u mean hiei actually wants to be taken?! damn i have got to read that!! i love this fic and can't wait tor ead more ^^ would youko kurama be making an apperance anytime soon? ^^ jsut wondering. u are a damn good lemon writer! i bow to ur greatness.
person Kitsoru
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Can't wait to see some Hiei action ^_~ heh
person tashayar-chan
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Sueals again* I LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCH! its very adorable and i can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
person comicfancat
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The name of the chapter fit ,I never thought Hiei would be a watcher and yet we all know he wanted
to know what Kurama saw in Yusuke.I was really happy to see an update it been a while,but the wait
was worth it wow what a chapter.Always knew Yusuke had it in him to be one hell of a lover and I can't see Kurama sharing with Hiei right away after waiting so long to have his koi.Nice job and can't wait for the next chapter :)