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for The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke

by kogaluver

person Triplequestionmark(???)
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad we're all even ^_^. I wanted to say that although its probobly what you're going for but there is a ton of praise and other "dirty talk" type things and its a little too much for me at least(not in the overwhelming sense in the ugh alright I understand already sense). I mean I would think that they have other things on their mind than to talk so much. But its been a while since I read it so i'll re-read it after the next chapter is out(hopefully soon). But even so its still great and too be honest I don't really like kurama or yuske or anyone in the show in a sexual way but your fic really makes it so it doesn't matter, your just that good. Too bad you don't update more but if it would degrade the quality of the work then its not worth it.
person YaoiOtaku
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my........that was diffenletly intense! Very good on the detail of their little "fun"! BJ
I'm wondering how you will enter Youko into the story as well Hiei.
Will Yusuke teach Hiei a lesson and give Youko a ride of his life? Or make a uke of both of them all at once?
Can't wait! ^-^
person Ryuukotsusei
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, told you I'd review you soon!

WELLLLL, this chapter was simply amazing! The things your mind come up with never cease to amaze me! From the begingin to the end I was simply impressed!

Kurama's reaction to Hiei's actions was so funny, and I don't blame him for not wanting to share. *Watches as Kurama pets Yusuke's head while repeating the words "My Yusuke"* LOL! But still I hope he DOES share with Hiei. Oh the mouth-watering, tantalizing images! On, on to that wonderfully hot lemon:

Right from tthe begining I was surprised by the amount of force Yusuke had! Punishing Foxy (Kurama) was mean, but a GOOD kind of mean (god, I'm twisted)! Kurama is some masochist - I mean really, no preperation?! Well, I remember Karasu saying something about him being a masochist. *Shivers at the thought of Karasu* O_o I nearly got a ose bleed when Kurama was sucking yusuke off! I'm glad that through all the banging Yusuke still made sure not to disappoint his slave and finish too soon. FUCKING FANTASTIC JOB!

Now I can't wait 'till Kurama has that oh-so-nice little chat with Hiei! What fun that'll be! I can't wait for the next chapter!

See ya!

P.S. -- I'll be sending you an e-mail soon, k?
person thelly
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was fucking awesome. nothing turns me on more than yusuke and kurama having hot steamy ,sex[lol]. Please when you do chappie seven i wanna see yusuke get fucked into next oblivion. I think it's time youko showed yusuke why he was so famous in the makai, wouldn't you agree. pretty please with cherries on top make that happen. and give youko that oh so sexy edge he's known for. that sexy seductive voice of his gets me every time. this story is kick ass and kick dick awesome[lol]- I want more soon= thelly
person night_tigres
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya, another yaoi fill chapter. Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the rest of the story
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh thank you thank you thank you!!! I love you fic so much, its my all time fave! ^ - ^
person cillaxox
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You just keep getting better and better. Vivid descriptions, accurate characterizations, interesting dialogue and really hot lemons. You're a really good writer that's why I enjoy this story so much. Well that and it has my favorite pairing and the really hot lemons that I mentioned earlier. I'm on pins and needles for the next chapter.
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To ??? TrippleQuestionMark

Apology wholeheartedly accepted. This was a huge misunderstanding. Next time, I'll try to be more clear when I respond to a reviewer, leaving no room for misinterpretation. I'm glad you like my story. Take care ^_^
person StarLindaKirara
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohayo!!! i think that yusuke REALLY fits the seme part!!! like u said, he s drippin testosterone (i write like fucking hell!!)(im argentinian , sorry n_nU)
well, i just wanted to say one thing....KURAMA=UKE, KURAMA=UKE!!!!!!!!!!!!
bye, nyaoh!!
person ???
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course i'm sorry to you, and I'm sorry about the gender thing I'm pretty sure i knew before but I don't really judge people by gender and it was late so I didn't even think about it. I hate being yelled at or embaressed especially if i know i'm wrong is all. I got lightheaded reading your response. I talk on forums alot and I live in NY(not manhatten but still NYC) so I take things in a bad light quite often. Ummmm.... to me usually means like yours saying "what are you talking about......" not "well...." as it probobly should. Also I tend to jump from topic to topic if i'm talking about too many things.(I've had two conversations at once before with the same person) Once again good story, your a very good writer, real reviews from now on.

P.S. This was mostly a misunderstanding wasn't it?