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wow...just WOW THAT. WAS. HOT. AS . HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG YOKO IS SO SEXY WHEN HES ALL DOMINATING^_^

Oh yeah ! an update and what a update it was..whow,had me on the edge of my seat through most of it.What a lemon in the last one as well,no I never mind reading your lemons and hope they continue through out the story.Poor Yusuke(yeah right) what a way to be taught a lesson and I can't wait to see what happens when he wakes up.Hope you can update soon and not leave us so tightly wound up for long.Very very good you write very well and I hope to see alot more from you

I hopeyou post t he next chappie soon, just reading that preview and having to wait for the chapter is torture!!! Not to mention all the torture Youko is going to do to Yusuke before he gets anything ^ - ~

Damn. That was the most awesome. Man you have the most incredible ideas that I've read. That was a nice touch with the vines too. Never thought that Youko can so....whats the word.....intense. I can't wait to read your next chapter with Hiei. I'M A BIG HUGE HIEI FAN. Man I wish I had that talent of yours. You now I was wondering. Would it be possible if you can give me pointers. You see after I finish my fic. that I have posted up, I was going to start a Yaoi fic with different pairing. The pairings are undecided though. And I not just a hiei fan girl. I'm also a YOAI FAN GIRL too. So I was just wondering if you would give me pointers to work on a yoai fan fic. But if your busy and all I understand and all. So anyway, can't wait to see the next chapter. Bye :)
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I have to tell you that your lemons are simply jaw dropping and the newest one is drool worthy. I can't wait to see what kind of punishment that naughty fox will get...or how well Yusuke will dominate Hiei.

I noticed that you left a comment to Ryukotsusei about a Yusuke/Sesshoumaru pairing and had to tell you that she and I have discussed such a pairing before and thought it would be most tasty if it were Toushin Yusuke/Sesshoumaru. Both have that gorgeous long hair and those sexy markings you just want to trace with your tongue.

I also have to tell you that I agree with you about Kouga. Such a sad way for him to go, but like I told Ryu, had Kagome picked Hiei, Masakazu would likely have killed Kouga anyway and then she would have been left completely alone.

Excellent chapter and an excellent fic. Can't wait to read more.

Alright sounds good hope you keep up that date you and so many other authors say something like this weekend or 3 days and I see nothing from them for a few months I can't tell if they're dead or alive.

*screams like a crasy fangirl*!@!!, yay, this stoey lives!!!, I ca already tel from the preview it wil be a great chapter, don't worry about posting at a certain time cause I'd wait to next christmas just to read your wonderul story!!!

wow that little preview was so hot i just can't wait until next week for the chapter

You don't need to apologize for taking your time in posting a new chapter. It's not like you're being paid to do this, you're doing it because it's what you love to do. Also the everyday issues of real life are much more important than fictional ones.

P.S.- the next chapter looks really good!

I do agree with you there. Its not right as a writer to just write down some crappy idea. Trust me I know...unfortuately. Anyways awesome preview. YAY YOUKO'S COMING. literaly and physically nyahahahaha. heh heh. Well hope to see that hot sexy adultrated lemon soon. I'm dying to know what happens next.