rate_review Reviews

Just too much goodness to review. Of course, you write the best lemons I have ever seen on ANY fanfiction website (and I have seen ALOT of fanfiction, no really, I have no life.). However, not only do you write amazing lemons, your dialogue, description, and all around non-citrusy scenes are amazing as well. When Kurama and Hiei are having their "conversation", your characterization was spot on - I could picture them perfectly. Hiei is not an easy charcter to write, espescially when he's in the situation you put him in - and you handled his consideration of and decision to become uke in a very believeable way.

Of course, the lemon was very steamy, and I spent a good hour mopping my brain and alot of drool off the keyboard. I am still picturing Youko's enormous clawed hand on the side of Yusuke's face. But - wow - you really housed Yusuike! It was amazing! Only you could do tentacles and not make it trite (and you obviously think everything through thouroughly: after every 5 thrusts, the size increases! Ha!). I'm actually jealous of Yusuke - I only wish I could be ravaged so completely that I lose the concept of speech!

So, don't hold out of me - is the threesome coming? You are the reason I became a fan of the Yusuke/Kurama pairing, but Hiei is my favourite character and I'm VERY (did I say very?) interested in seeing how you not only portray him in your lemons, but also how you portray him being Yusuke's submissive uke (and possibly Kurama's uke as well - it IS all up to Yusuke after all!)

So well done, I'm still not thinking straight.

Yea for Kogas Hentai Lover!

*winces* it was damn hot and great to read, but ugh that had to be some over-whelming shit to make Yusuke (of all people) to try and stop it. oww... maybe it's jsut me but somehow i think this might put a tiny bit of strain on the relationship. but that's jsut me maybe i'm reading too much into this. well this is good. and the lesson elarned today: for yusuke it's not to keep anything from youko; for foxy boy it's to know when the limits your lover can take and what them in case they wanna stop. i'm off but i can't wait for the next chapter *flashes victory sign*

*jaw drops* That had to be one of the best yaoi chapters I have ever read. Yaoi's in this story just keep getting hotter and steamer. ROCK ON AUTHOR!!!!

wow...that was hott as hell...... This was a real emotion jerker, feeling bad for Yusuke because Yoko denied his... well orgasim. I liked the part when Hiei expressed his interest in being an uke for once! ^ - ^ I hope he gets to join the fun soon, not to mention all the naughty things Yusuke gets to do back to Kurama, luck withfuture chappis!

Wow... Thats just...WOW !!!!! I can't wait to see the threesome(if it happens) Poor yusuke though.. Bad youko! I'll flog you XD

Wow. Wow. WOW. That's all I can say, wow. You should definitly stick to what you are best at LEMONS! Man, I'd rather you write each chapter just as long and lemonish as this one than have short ones withour lemons everytime and update faster. This way, I can enjoy your story for a longer time each time you update! I can wait. I'm patient enough. Anyway, Wow. Wow. WOW. wow...wow....wow.....wow......wow.......wow.......*voice fades away*. *shakes head* You are so good at this. Update soon!!!!^_______________^

I'm... I'm Speechless LMAO Trying to get my lust filled mind to cooperate with what I want to say here, it'll take a moment so bear with me please. Oh wow. You have a talent with lemons that I could never hope to achieve. This was spectacular. Everything flowed just so damned perfectly. From the moment Yusuke walked into the room until Kurama cuddled up to him, it was all just perfect. I wonder though, how will Yusuke react to him when he wakes up. The trust they have, although it was unintentional, was broken. Though Yusuke seems to bounce back rather well, I think he might be a bit more hesitant now whenever Youko comes out to play. I know i would be. Damn, that was intense.

I like how you are bringing Hiei into the mix, even if it's only a one shot deal. Hiei/Yusuke is rapidly becoming one of my favorite yaoi pairings. Now, that said I know I've been wishy washy on doing my own Yaoi fic. That has now changed, somewhat anyway. I am in the process of writing what was SUPPOSED to be a one shot and it quickly ballooned into more. The official pairings will be Hiei/Kag and Kurama/Miroku. Don't ask, I have no idea where the hell the thought actually came from, I just have to figure out exactly how to pull it off LOL

Sorry about what happened to Kouga in Moon, it had to be done. Never fear, his part in the fic is not over though I'm not entirely certain how much more he will show up. I have someone who wants to do a side fic to accompany On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon for the next chapters where Kouga does appear. I'm greatly having fun with that one, although I think I might have lost alot of readers with just how dark it became.

Ahh well, enough about my fics, I greatly enjoyed this chapter and I anxiously await the next one. Keep up the wonderful work and update soon please!

You know I liked this chapter. And someone actually had the balls to flame this? I should kick their ass.

*smiles lecherously*

It's so cold...*coughINTEXAScough*...won't you let me use your thighs as ear muffs?



Good times and rock on,

Dom

wow that was hot it was so hot that i don't even care that yusuke passed out and that you left a cliffy.

I wish I had the balls to write like you. There are so many phrasings that I find particularly or done so well that I can't possibly list them all, but here are a couple:

full disclosure (such seductive inuendo)

gleefully humping his navel (so funny, lol)

Physical sensation is heightened when sight is removed from the equation, Yusuke. (Oooh, I just loved the way you worded that)

The references to food in Yoko’s description of Yusuke are so cute and witty.

You have such a way with words. You are delightfully witty, embarrassingly lewd, have a wide array in styles of phrasing, and you can make it all work together wonderfully. It is great how you decided to have Yoko be seme and Kurama be uke. That was a nice twist.

Oh, and the incorporation of Kurama’s plants was so expertly done. I don’t know how you do it. You’re so much the hentai! I feel sorry for poor Yusuke. I want some revenge on the fox. Yup.

There is way too much fun, serious, sexy and hot stuff in this chapter that I could comment on, but alas, I would have to write a chapter of my own size in order to do it!

Another awesome and amazing chapter. Well, worth the wait.

Hanyou Slave aka Snowfall