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for The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke

by kogaluver

person ???
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A few comments:
1. I can't belive you made him give before the good part >_<
2. To be honest I'm not too fond of yuske on top but with you writing it I'll read it anyway
3. Kurama is crazy that would REALLY hurt. And I do mean hurt.
4. Maybe you should edit in a pic of yoko kurama or a link to one cause I sorta forgot what he looked like.
5. What shows are you planning to do after this?
6. Don't put hiei in demon form its creepy.
7. Are there any things that your specifically against? minor,beast ect.?
8. You ever get to read my challenges? I doubt you'd like'em tho. And the older ones are unspecific and poorly written.
8 1/2. A few are about shippo any chance on you doing a shippo fic?
9. How big is yoko kurama? I mean I can't tell who has a bigger penis you keep calling them both huge >_<.
10. Well thats 9 comments too many so just plain good job.
person Chaotic Angel (too dazed and horny to login)
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.......Holy Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was.............fuckin' awesome..........amazing

I don't even really watch anime in general (I'm a confessed Harry Potter addict) but a friend of mine sent me this fic and pictures of each charater in a e-mail and said I absolutly had to read this.

Damn she was right.........

I'm using the last of my sanity to tell you that you are a goddess and I can wait to read more

Peace,

Angel
person HieiJaganshi11
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope I'm not ruining anything if u haven't seen da hole series but does yuusuke know dat he is a demon? If he doesn't yet does he eva find out in dis fic? cause i know he's using his demonic instincts but does he or Kurama(Yoko) eva figure dat out?
person cillaxox
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^____^ That was so worth the wait! The conversation between Hiei and Kurama was really funny, especially the way Hiei was goading the fox. I loved the way you portray Kurama as being a little prissy. He always acts so cool, but behind closed doors it seems like he might act that way. I liked the way you worked the plants into the sex scene, very creative. I think I might have to take up gardening ^_^ And the lemon! As I'm sure you already know it was damn hot! Kurama went a little overboard, but I'm sure Yusuke will make him see the error of his ways (hint, hint, wink, wink) As for Hiei...eagerly awaiting that development.
person Kitsoru
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AGH! I LOVE THIS FIC!! Can't wait for another update!! ^__^ Especially seeing Hiei as an uke, whenever (and if ever) that happens ^^
person Suryallee
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ups!
Looks like Yoko is in trouble.
And Hiei too!
person MeLaiya
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! That was THE most amazing YYH K/Y fic i have every read in my entire life. My panties are fucking skwelching. I have never read one that was so hardcore, i love this. Its nothing like the others and thats what i love about it. Please keep up the good work and update asap. PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU, DONT LEAVE US HANGIN!!!
person kai
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! more punishment on the way!! so a threesome huh?! yay!! talk about almost being fucked to death!! but what a way to go!!!! XDDD
update soon!!!
person Lady Threarah
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was worth the wait! If all of your long periods of waiting for another chapter produce one like chapter 7, then I won't ever be pestering you to forget your real life to work on this one. Just don't leave this story until it's finished, okay?

And by the way, if you decide not to do the Sensui Arc, will you at least let Kurama solve the 'riddle' of Yusuke acting like a demon when, to all appearances, he is human? Please?

Or should I just be happy that you're even bothering with this story in the first place and just be happy with what I've got?
person DQLH
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KEEP IT CUMMING