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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry I haven't reviewed untill now. your story is increadible one of the best I have read in my 4 years of reading fan fiction. I give you 12 out of 10 and hope you continue the fic very soon because I wish to finish reading it. you have incredible talent when it comes to writing. I'm glad that I found your fic because I love yusuke/ kurama and some times hiei/yusuke and hiei/yusuke/kurama so this really vaught my eye. thanks for posting it and hope to read more. ^_^
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap that chapter was good. i luv your writing, it mesmorizes me! Ill look forward to the next chapter. review soon plz.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow your story is really good. one of the best, you have a way with words, its amazing. the length of the lemons in your story are really good and such detail (::evil smirk::) (::getting horny::) i always look forward to your story. i also like yusuke on the bottom because im perverted like that. update soon!
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo awesome. I was a little worried there but I know it will turn out alright. *squeals* they are soooo kawaii together ^_^
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! *claps* Awsomeness! Cookies and pocky for you! And I'll give you yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! This is me, your good fiend, reviewing you under my other pen-name. First I want to say sorry for taking so long to review you! I'M SO SORRY! *Begs forgiveness* Now, for the fic:
OMFG! This was the best chapter yet! You made a really good decision by putting Yoko in this fic! But before getting to that, I'll start from the begining. It was a really good idea to have Yusuke and Kurama talk about different sexual situations. Romantic, hard core, M&S, Kurama as top every now and then. And I knew that Kurama would come up with the perfect solution so that Yusuke wouldn't doubt himself.
Which leads me to the part with Hiei. That was AWESOME! Kurama was so freak'n mad and Hiei didn't even break a sweat! And then Kurama was like "You just shove your dick up some poor demon's ass wether he wants it or not!" and Heie was like "Have you forgotten what it means to be a demon?" I half expected those two to start fighting! LOL! And when Yoko found out that Yusuke had gotten a hard-on from Hiei, what a perfect way to set up the next sex scene. And at least he considered letting Hiei into a three-some. Uke Hiei, how interesting.
I so loved the things you had him doing with the vines, so sexy! And blind-folding him, no less! The whole time I was like, "Fuck him, Yoko, fuck him. Fuck him, Yoko, fuck him!" HEHEHEHE! Such perverted mids we have!
*shifty eye look*
Man, Yusuke's release must have been freak'n intense. Actuall, it WAS intense! How could Yoko's mouth hold all of that?! O_o
Great job on this, truly. You never cease to amaze me. Oh, and as for the chapters, I personally rhink that they are fine the way they are. I like how long they are, gives you more to read and it is worth the wait. But that's just one oponion, do what YOU think is right. I'll be e-mailing you soon, so until chapter 8, update soon!
12 STARS
OMFG! This was the best chapter yet! You made a really good decision by putting Yoko in this fic! But before getting to that, I'll start from the begining. It was a really good idea to have Yusuke and Kurama talk about different sexual situations. Romantic, hard core, M&S, Kurama as top every now and then. And I knew that Kurama would come up with the perfect solution so that Yusuke wouldn't doubt himself.
Which leads me to the part with Hiei. That was AWESOME! Kurama was so freak'n mad and Hiei didn't even break a sweat! And then Kurama was like "You just shove your dick up some poor demon's ass wether he wants it or not!" and Heie was like "Have you forgotten what it means to be a demon?" I half expected those two to start fighting! LOL! And when Yoko found out that Yusuke had gotten a hard-on from Hiei, what a perfect way to set up the next sex scene. And at least he considered letting Hiei into a three-some. Uke Hiei, how interesting.
I so loved the things you had him doing with the vines, so sexy! And blind-folding him, no less! The whole time I was like, "Fuck him, Yoko, fuck him. Fuck him, Yoko, fuck him!" HEHEHEHE! Such perverted mids we have!
*shifty eye look*
Man, Yusuke's release must have been freak'n intense. Actuall, it WAS intense! How could Yoko's mouth hold all of that?! O_o
Great job on this, truly. You never cease to amaze me. Oh, and as for the chapters, I personally rhink that they are fine the way they are. I like how long they are, gives you more to read and it is worth the wait. But that's just one oponion, do what YOU think is right. I'll be e-mailing you soon, so until chapter 8, update soon!
12 STARS
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you wrote the last chapter (7). Very good! ^-^
Take your time.....a writer's block sucks!!! Not to mention the author has a life too! (sigh) -_-
Just wondering, have you have any idea how to bring in Yusuke's demon background out?
Take your time.....a writer's block sucks!!! Not to mention the author has a life too! (sigh) -_-
Just wondering, have you have any idea how to bring in Yusuke's demon background out?
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read your story on mediaminer. I would have reviewed there but its such a bitch! The code thing never works! D:< Anyway, before I got pissed, I read you story and it was soo hot... I was like O.O "Wow..." This is the first YusukexKurama fic I've ever read, and I wanna read more because of it! I agree that KxH is really over done. Most of them suck too. I think the last chapter was really good, but damn you for leaving us not knowing what Yusuke is gonna do to Kurama! Hopefully you real life problems aren't too bad, like sickness or something. Good luck with the next chapter!
Oh, yeah... I was going to give sugestions but I dont see anything wrong...
And one more thing? Would it be ok if I asked if you could email me when you update,please? Thanks!
(whoo run on... meh.. I'm too lazy to change it)
Oh, yeah... I was going to give sugestions but I dont see anything wrong...
And one more thing? Would it be ok if I asked if you could email me when you update,please? Thanks!
(whoo run on... meh.. I'm too lazy to change it)
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so fucking hot!!! please update soon!! but with the length of your chapters i know that will be to much of a plea, but PLEASE!! i LOVE this story!!! and will die without it!!!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm sorry that i'm just reading this since your update. but i finally did and damn you. yusuke said he wasn't no pussy and could take whatever youko dished out. well sorry yusuke, you are a pussy. plus, how dare you leave youko like that? i was hoping that youko would fuck the living daylights out of yusuke. oh well, c'est la vie.
but i did find great enjoyment out of kurama's and hiei's talk. but i was hoping for kurama to attack heie and we get a great fight sence. but it doesn't matter, this story still kicks major ass^_^V
(p.s. do you do any sesshomaru/miroku fics?)
but i did find great enjoyment out of kurama's and hiei's talk. but i was hoping for kurama to attack heie and we get a great fight sence. but it doesn't matter, this story still kicks major ass^_^V
(p.s. do you do any sesshomaru/miroku fics?)