rate_review Reviews

YAY A NEW CHAPTER. It took forever but it twas worth it. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SANTA CLAUS, THIS IS THE BEST PRESENT EVER (high childish voice) Hope you have a merry christmas. ah don't ya just love ze yaoi song. who wouldn't. nyahahahahaha. Yup its strange how they can still actually walk with all the fucking around we evil authoresses make em do

I love the way you lead into chapter eight; a little pillow talk and Yusuke deciding to get
even with Kurama. The way you word things always makes me smile or chuckle; ‘Other
than my balls being sore as hell, I’m fine...’.

You seemed to have spent more time on the finer details of the character’s thoughts.
I like that. It gave the chapter more depth.

Leaving Kurama locked outside of the bathroom was a cool idea. Make the fox wonder.
Loved it. And then you tortured Kurama so well. *long sigh* Yusuke is such a naughty,
nasty boy. Gotta love him.

You could have used the conversation at the end as some major angst, but instead,
turned it humorous. I like that.

Of course, everyone knows that your lemons are always so hot. You’re corrupting me.
I don’t think I blushed once even though this was one of your usual graphic lemons that
are so descriptive. One thing about you, you’re not shy about putting it right out there.
I admire that boldness.

I think that this is one of your best chapters yet; not just because of the lemon, but simply
because of the flow of events and your attention to the finer details of the character’s thoughts.
You had a great lead in and an excellent exit that leaves the reader hungry for more, yet
satisfied with the progression of events, and of course, the nice side-trip of smut!

Also, I just want to congratulate you on your progress as an author. I can’t make your
chapters all those pretty rainbow colors anymore because you have so few errors and little
that needs changed.

Awesome job!

Love ya,

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

Wow,what a chapter that was and well worth the wait.Glad to see you did'nt let the Hiei thing get to far out of hand between
the two.Yet Can't wait to see how Yusuke handles the threesome.Plus can't wait to see how he fairs at the adult store.My mom works at a porn store(or as they call it)Adultmart and she's always talking about the people that go in there(a real wild bunch at times).If you go that far and need help with the discription of the inside of one let me know and I'll help.

Damn that was SOOOO HHHHOOOTTT!!!!!! I swear that if I keep on reading your fic then I'm going to have to take long cold showers. I can't wait for the threesome with Hiei and more punishment for Kurama. I understand if you were busy and need to do stuff, take your time, DON'T RUSH. However, the pointer are not just for me first fic that I'm doing but sadly have some sort of writers blocks, which fucking sucks, but after or during my fic I was thinking of doing a yaoi fic. as well with everything and some. I have some what the ideal pairing to set up and it may or may not be a YYH fic but it probably will be. The thing is, is that I was thinking of doing a one set scene with the whole Master and Slave role. It's just one scene, maybe two but anyway, just need the whole pointers for that and the idea for the Master and Slave thing. Keep the writing going and kinky. (Not is a bad way but a good way thing)

Ang Avalonis :) smiley

i so agreed with yusuke, life is good though i think its going to get better.

Chapter 8 was just as good as your previous chapters, if not better. It was definitly worth the wait! And I apologize for asking the same questions over and over; I guess my brain is just as stuck on that scenario. Though if you do decide, I think a sequal would be better than adding it to this story. I absoloutly love your long chapters, and their fantastic lemons inside. And I understand about fighting your family for computer time and hand writing your chapters out first. Keep in mind though, even if life gets in the way, us loyal readers would wait forever. Take as much time as you need to write; quality is always better than quantity.

Happy Holidays, Love!

Gods that was hot! I do so think that my naughty little fox deserves two chapters of punishment. And I can't wait to see Hiei join in the fun. Methinks he will be surprised, especially since he hasn't played the forplay game before. I hope he's ready for one hell of a ride. Update soon please?

Oh and yes, Toushin and Sesshoumaru...yummy.

This story is a wet dream, I tell you.

Where is the chapter? :(

that is such a teasign chapter!!! i 've been reading since the beginning but i don't think i have ever reviewed...hope you get your writing back!!

Damn!! You really know how to tease someone into checking back with your story once a day for updates! But that...! I mean, wow!!!
You mentioned earlier that you didn't know if you were going to continue this into the Sensui Arc. I think that it would be fun if you did. I mean, at the start, when Yusuke was kidnapped, and Kurama had to face Kaitou alone.... what would be going through his head through all that? And at the end, when Yusuke dies again? I'll bet I know what's going to happen later that night!
But, you don't have to if you don't want to. I just thought that it would be interesting, is all.

Ja ne!