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for The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke

by kogaluver

person hColleen
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay...here...I'll be 295...and I'll review over here...just cause I can and I'm a brat and we all know that. I won't say that I wonder if Yusuke was on his head to fuck Kurama (almost typed Kuronue...tells you where my brain is, ne?)....have you ever had your knees by your ears? Anyways...oh, I suppose Yusuke could have been kneeling by Kurama's head. Anyways...I said I wasn't going to say that cause it should have occured to me when I was beta'ing instead of later. Sorry for being slow about that...but...seriously....very hot....very yummy....and lessee what they do to the darling hiyoukai, ne? And Yusuke with toys...that should be interesting ;) Lots of love...talk to you later :D
person BWinner(Not signed in)
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BEST HOLIDAY GIFT EVER! *Huggles the author* You are my HERO! I think I mah have metioned that before but hell I am doing it again. I was just noticing that besides this chapter being your absolute MOST SEXIEST EVER! I mean the from the bottom of my little hentai heart here...(I'm a sucker for dirty talk what can I say ^^;) No, I noticed how well you wrote out the characteres of Kuama and Yusuke this time. They really stood out to me in this chapter. I mena you have this way of protraying them that is like this wierd and wonderful mix of IC and OOC... I find it just delightful really I do. I hope to see chapter nine come out soon in the new year! Best wishes and Happy New Year!
~Winner
person Ryukotsusei
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok it's official. If there was any part of my brain that wasn't thoroughly corrupted before, It is now! Have I ever told you that you are my favorite Yaoi writer? You are.. seriously. This story is just.. wow. I love it. So much in fact that it's inspired me in my artwork, envisioning that threesome scene that you have coming up and torturing Hiei with foreplay. If you want to take a peek, this is the picture that came out. I believe you have to be registered to view it though since it is NC-17 material. http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/view/96592/ There are other pictures your work has inspired as well but I think I am the most proud of this one. I just couldn't get the thought of Yusuke giving orders out to the two of them out of my head.

As for my stories, I just have been totally uninspired for writing lately. It's call coming out in my artwork, so who knows when I'll get around to updating again. I think I burnt myself out for a while. As for a pure Yaoi fic, I just might end up doing that once I feel like writing again. I need plot bunnies though, I already Know I'd want it to be a Hiei/Yusuke if I did lol

Anyhow, lovely lovely chapter as always! I can't wait to read the next one. Hope you had a Merry Christmas and enjoy the new year. Update soon please!
person cillaxox
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it took me this long to see that you updated. That's pretty sad since this story is under my Recommended Reading! That was a wonderfully detailed lemon. Hot guys having hot sex makes me very happy indeed. The part where Yusuke locked Kurama out the bathroom- priceless! Serves the fox right. Yay for adult toy stores! That should be fund for Yusuke, as well as Kurama. Those stores are so much fun to go to! Yes, I freely admit that I frequent them, I am a pervert and proud! Go perverts! Sorry, I got a little carried away. Anyways, I can't wait to see what the Master has in store for his Slave; and in turn what they have instore for Hiei. I love Hiei and anytime he getting some makes me happy.
person ShadowofLight
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh evil! evil evil evil! damn yusuke is back with a vengence! ^^ i am so gonna read hte next chapter! sorry didn't reply sooner. eee yuske & kurama & hiei--what i'd give for a dj comic of that!!! can't wait ^^ i so love this fic!! ur so damn good!!
person Yukizora
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ For updating! Can't imagine Hiei taking orders from anyone yet, but in this story you're writing loads of things happen that I've never even thought of, so I guess Hiei submiting to Yusuke is very possible. Can't wait for the next chapter and holly crap-thanks for another super-long chapter!
person Dominic Shade
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. Seriously. Rock on with your hentai self. I can't wait for Kurama's Punishment Part 2. I'm kinda wondering if there's anything Yusuke could really do to surprise his foxy slave though...I mean...there are only so many devices and positions, lol.

And omg, when do we get to the Hiei loving?! I mean...grr! Come on woman!

And I would so wear you like a feed bag.


Good times and rock on,

Dom
person Kitsoru
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! new chappie!! twas great, can't wait for Hiei action!! the sexiest Hiei is an uke Hiei, ne? <^^>
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too...many...things...brain melting...

OK, I'm better now. You know, my boyfriend went on a business trip, and I was on the phone with him while checking aff.net, and then I'm like "OH GOD - SHE UPDATED" and the bf says "So that chapter of the Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke is up?" (obviously I talk about your story ALOT), and I'm like "YEAGOTTAGOBYE!"

You so rule. I keep bursting out with "Fuck your boy toy!" and "Crawl to Daddy, my little firefly" and then giggling. You know I can't wait for chapter 9, and that Hiei's introduction to foreplay and master-servant play is going to be both humiliating and painful (but he'll like it anyway - he's just surly like that). I'm looking forward to how you portray Hiei - as your characterization had always been spot-on.

As usual, your lemon was exquisite. You always seem to come up with new ways to make my jaw drop, and your writing always pushes me to be more craetive and over-the-top in my own stories. Jeez - that whole position with Kurama bent over backwards on the floor - my brain popped. And Yusuke can really dirty talk, it's funny and hot at the same time.

Did I say that you rule? Well, even if I did, I need to say it again - you rule!

person Neko Miu
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea I'm back.. well I still really love your story, so much so that I have come here to tell you good luck with future chapters for I will not be able to read them. *damn internet companys!* I hope many ideas come to you and you enjoy writing them.

good luck!
-Neko Miu