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Oh my freakin gosh!! O_O You write such amazing smut scenes. You are a perv, and I now officially love you for that. This chapter was so amazing. I can't believe Hiei was such a needy uke. It was like, he just jumped right into the role. And. All. The. Sex. No idea how you managed, but you did. And it was so great! Now, I'm ready for Yusuke's punishment of Kurama. Wonderful job this chapter. Abso-freakin-tabulous! (Yep, three words in one! ^.^)

GAH! Can you believe I forgot this when I just reviewed? And it was so important I just felt the need to review again. The adult store section that you got the great hcolleen's help with was too funny! Jo was hilarious! I really loved that scene, and that Yusuke was unconsciously acting as a dominant. It was too great!

that was hot and now i can't wait to see how the second part of yusuke punshment is going to go.

I kind of feltthat kurama was left out of a lot of the fun but I believe it was still worth the wait. how do you think you are going to finsh off the story? I would love to see the ending and are you going to have another three-some again. What is going to happen to hiei when he wakes up? I am sorry if I'm thinking too much ahead but curiosity did kill the cat.

Wow,is all I say to this chapter.Wow.
Its was written very very well and had me drooling for more.It was a little bit of a wait yet very very worth it.What a way for Hiei to find out just how much he can trust them.When they wake up will it be all smiles and at least breakfast or will Hiei be gone before anything could be said.And what about punishment part 2 this could be good and will Hiei get to watch or will it be just the two of them.Can't wait for the next update.Still panting from the heat here or your story don't know witch it is but loving it . Great Job

wow!

I love your story it's great.Have a great weekend!

Ahhh...another beautiful, erotic, creative chapter. I swear I squealed when I saw that update, it was right after I updated my story. Your writings are so beautiful and detailed, you make me look like a kndergarter compared to you. You and KuwaL (aka SinkingIntoDarkness) and my best friend made me become a writer on this site and any other sites. KuwaL got me hooked on Kuwabara/Hiei pairings, and you made me write my dirty thoughts of them seeing that your not afraid to write yours. My best friend and girlfriend just supported me in the whole writing thing (I love my Beth, she's so good to me). If you ever need dirty idea's how Jo should help Yusuke and Kurama top that experince, I have a whole list....Hehe ^.^ I'm such a perv. Well I gotta go, I was supposed to post my chapter and then join my girlfriend in bed but I got hook on your updata, and I think she's way beyond pissed now. Hehe....loves ya, Terra

Wow awesome chapter. -starry eyes- i needed a good threesome story. please continue when you got more plot bunnies for the next chapter. i can't wait. keep it going k. bai bai

I love this story and your other story as well. Yusuke, Kurama, and Hiei all togther was hot. I can't wait to see how Yusuke will finish punishing Kurama and I hope Yoko is forced out to play. Please update soon :)

Damn, but if that wasn't hot, then I don't know what is. I'm so glad I have the house to myself for the moment... You really know how to write them, and I can't wait to see what you're going to have Yusuke do to Kurama. Gods, but you're wonderful. I wish I could meet you and tell you this face to face, but I guess I'll have to settle for leaving a review of your fabulous work.

Ja ne!