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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay pervesion... I love this fic!! You are my favorite person!!!! *give's you "kitsune girl's favorite person" hat* Keep writeing this has been the best thing I've read in monthes!
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I finally got around to reviewing this fic. Its good, well written.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that chapter was well worth waiting for. parts had me laughing while others made me need a cold shower. loved the little bickering session between hiei and kurama. think i'd have to argue to, in that case. I eagerly await the next update. as always you did a splendid job. keep up the great work *hands you Aoshi cookies and a beer*
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really girl, where do I begin?
First of all, I want to apologize for not reviewing this sooner, but I wanted a bit of time to think it over, and life did not allow me to review until now. But really, you outdid yourself. I know I read the first part while you were here - and what I read was perfect, but then you went and imporved on it. Then, I get to read the second part, and all I have to say is YOU WRITE THE PORN - KHL FOR THE WIN! Seriously, this lemon is putting you in the history books. In 20 years, YYH fans far and wide will be like "KHL? Oh yeah, she writes the PORN!"
Aside from the whole hotness-my-brain-melted-and-you-owe-me-a-new-one factor, this was just beautifully written. You take the time and effort to bring something great to the table and it shows. No, I am not blowing smoke up your ass...it's true.
But let's give examples, shall we?
HOLY FUCK THE POSITION. You were right, I haven’t seen that one done before in fanfic (and we all know I’ve been around the fandom). That was crazy...really crazy. I don't know if I'd rather be Hiei or Kurama at that point, there were obviously benefits to both.
The image that greets Hiei when he arrives in Kurama’s room, the way Yusuke and Kurama are positioned, what they’re doing, and what they’re wearing…just…really that's nosebleed central. We have to get Ryou to draw that for me.
Those paragraphs where you explored Hiei’s thoughts before he showed up at Kurama’s were very well done. You managed to get in a perfectly characterized view of Hiei’s psyche, and you did it with 5 paragraphs. Perfect.
Kurama tossing his hair and Hiei begging yet at the same time yelling at Kurama to get the damn hair out of his face. That was hilarious.
“You know how I like it, my little fox bitch.” HAHAHAHAHA. Yusuke just hits the dirty talk right on.
“Multitasking was one of Kurama’s strengths.” BEST. LINE. EVAR. I read that to EMOD and he said “I really don’t want to know what Kurama is doing to deserve that statement, do I?”
“Damn, I love the way you do that, Kurama. Let’s hear it for having skills,” That’s just so Yusuke.
I love the fact that Hiei doesn’t have any pain during penetration, I mean, he’s a demon, and his anatomy is not exactly like Kurama’s and Yusuke’s, and very few authors acknowledge that. “Maybe our little firefly was meant to be uke.” Yeah, Yusuke was good enough not to say that out loud, but I’m sure he shared that thought with Kurama later and they laughed over it.
Kurama’s eyes flashing gold as he came – nice. Then the way he responded to Hiei’s little jib about passing out was so…KURAMA.
You know I'm going to read this, like 500000000000000 times, right? You own everything, I so love you, and I gave EMOD that kiss. Sure, I'm a pervert, but you're right there next to me.
First of all, I want to apologize for not reviewing this sooner, but I wanted a bit of time to think it over, and life did not allow me to review until now. But really, you outdid yourself. I know I read the first part while you were here - and what I read was perfect, but then you went and imporved on it. Then, I get to read the second part, and all I have to say is YOU WRITE THE PORN - KHL FOR THE WIN! Seriously, this lemon is putting you in the history books. In 20 years, YYH fans far and wide will be like "KHL? Oh yeah, she writes the PORN!"
Aside from the whole hotness-my-brain-melted-and-you-owe-me-a-new-one factor, this was just beautifully written. You take the time and effort to bring something great to the table and it shows. No, I am not blowing smoke up your ass...it's true.
But let's give examples, shall we?
HOLY FUCK THE POSITION. You were right, I haven’t seen that one done before in fanfic (and we all know I’ve been around the fandom). That was crazy...really crazy. I don't know if I'd rather be Hiei or Kurama at that point, there were obviously benefits to both.
The image that greets Hiei when he arrives in Kurama’s room, the way Yusuke and Kurama are positioned, what they’re doing, and what they’re wearing…just…really that's nosebleed central. We have to get Ryou to draw that for me.
Those paragraphs where you explored Hiei’s thoughts before he showed up at Kurama’s were very well done. You managed to get in a perfectly characterized view of Hiei’s psyche, and you did it with 5 paragraphs. Perfect.
Kurama tossing his hair and Hiei begging yet at the same time yelling at Kurama to get the damn hair out of his face. That was hilarious.
“You know how I like it, my little fox bitch.” HAHAHAHAHA. Yusuke just hits the dirty talk right on.
“Multitasking was one of Kurama’s strengths.” BEST. LINE. EVAR. I read that to EMOD and he said “I really don’t want to know what Kurama is doing to deserve that statement, do I?”
“Damn, I love the way you do that, Kurama. Let’s hear it for having skills,” That’s just so Yusuke.
I love the fact that Hiei doesn’t have any pain during penetration, I mean, he’s a demon, and his anatomy is not exactly like Kurama’s and Yusuke’s, and very few authors acknowledge that. “Maybe our little firefly was meant to be uke.” Yeah, Yusuke was good enough not to say that out loud, but I’m sure he shared that thought with Kurama later and they laughed over it.
Kurama’s eyes flashing gold as he came – nice. Then the way he responded to Hiei’s little jib about passing out was so…KURAMA.
You know I'm going to read this, like 500000000000000 times, right? You own everything, I so love you, and I gave EMOD that kiss. Sure, I'm a pervert, but you're right there next to me.
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ryukotsusei! That was the hottest threesome fanart ever! I love you! Oh and Koga I love you too! See this story is just so touching. T_T
I love you all!
Update plz when you have the time.
PS
Yeah Jo was cute they should invite him over. I also enjoyed the way he said sir.
I love you all!
Update plz when you have the time.
PS
Yeah Jo was cute they should invite him over. I also enjoyed the way he said sir.
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey it's me again. okay so I was just reading some other fics and I have to say that your story trully, undeniably, is the best! None of the other stories compare to the greatness of 'The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke'! I have to take a break from reading so I can enjoy other fics.(that's not a really bad thing, I guess.)...So yeah, yor a great writer.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeals loudly* omg u updated, yay u!! omg that was like heart of the sun hot hot hot!!! hell i don't blame Jo either but shit that was great!! wow!! there are not enough words in the human dictionary to describe this. u are--unbelievably good ya know? anyway, thnxs for so sharing this!! u are a master--no no u are waaaaaaaaaay above adept!! can't wait to read hte rest ^^ *evil snicker*
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wooohhhh
*fans myself*
Man I'm just getting hot and heavy over this. That that is the most....what can I say for this.......sexy lemon of Yusuke/Kurama/Hiei scene that I ever seen. I was so excited about the next chapter when you put the trailer in. Now the wait was worth it!!!
I'm wondering if there are going to be more of the three together or is going to be Kurama and Yusuke from now on...either way it's brilliant. Well nine chapters so far, but just curious how many chapters were you thinking of doing for this fic before and now??? Just a thought......
Well can't wait for you next update soon and all!!!
Ang Avalonis :) smiley
*fans myself*
Man I'm just getting hot and heavy over this. That that is the most....what can I say for this.......sexy lemon of Yusuke/Kurama/Hiei scene that I ever seen. I was so excited about the next chapter when you put the trailer in. Now the wait was worth it!!!
I'm wondering if there are going to be more of the three together or is going to be Kurama and Yusuke from now on...either way it's brilliant. Well nine chapters so far, but just curious how many chapters were you thinking of doing for this fic before and now??? Just a thought......
Well can't wait for you next update soon and all!!!
Ang Avalonis :) smiley
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this....was.....hot. oh my goodness this was worth the wait. damn yusuke's hot as seme and having bith kurama and hiei uke, just as hot. cant wait to read more and cant wait to see yusuke get his revenge on kurama. get it up and dont stop wat your doing, its great. :D
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!!!!!Are you an actual author because you put enough detail into your writing to be an author! This story is the best fanfic I've EVER read (I am Not kidding!) Please hurry with the rest of the story! Also, I think it was really sweet with Hiei and his trusting them, it made me say,"Aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwww." I loved it so keep it up!