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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ga-ah! I got addicted to this fic to find it's unfinished! Please tell me you will be writing more of this! So incredibly hot and sweet and everything in between, I want to see if the arrangement with Hiei will be permanent or if he'll find someone of his own (Kuwabara! Or Koenma! *snort* - actually that could be interesting . . . *drools over Koenma's teen form* ^__^). I also really loved the Yoko/Yusuke scene and would love to see more. Are there any Kurama/Yusuke/Yoko fics out there? (where he'll start off as one and turn into the other?) I know what it's like though to have writer's block and stuff going on irl and I hope everything is going okay in your life and you get inspired to write more (lots more ^__~) very soon!
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Kami! I love ur story!! Please keep it coming!!!!
Ja Ne!
ps- loved ur title, 'crawl to daddy, my little firefly,' utterlly priceless!!
Ja Ne!
ps- loved ur title, 'crawl to daddy, my little firefly,' utterlly priceless!!
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story! its sooo hot...god...i have to pace for a few min to hold of my relese...plz update! i read your inu story and i loved it!i look forward to your update!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn!! your on fire gurl !!!!! i love that idea you came up with on how yusuke was going to fuck hiei and kurama @ the same time
you go girl keep up the good work
you go girl keep up the good work
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi, i like what you have so far. and i can not wait for the next chapter becasue i want to know what yusuke does to kurama.
maybe hiei could return in later chapters for more lessons with yusuke. becasue he seems to enjoy them some much. and we could learn more about kurama's past.
please let me know when you update so that i can read it. becasue i really like this story.
katie
maybe hiei could return in later chapters for more lessons with yusuke. becasue he seems to enjoy them some much. and we could learn more about kurama's past.
please let me know when you update so that i can read it. becasue i really like this story.
katie
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Girl! Sorry that I haven't been reviewing like I should, but you have to know that all of your chapters are well written. You have such a talent for allowing us to see what is going on in your head. I never get confused about the positioning of your characters or anything! Jo was such a cute character. I really liked him. Too bad I can't take him home with me. Oooh, and you always melt the north pole with your lemons. Hiei is so funny. You wrote his character well, all of them actually. I just lurve Kurama. He makes such a good uke.
Um, my mind isn't working properly, so this review really sucks, but I'm trying, ne? I like that your chapters are so long, eh, even if beta'ing takes freakin' forever! You really leave the reader satisfied. I think that is one of the reasons why you have such a following. The other reason in obvious. You are a class A hentai!
I know that you worked hard on this chapter and it turned out really well. Take a vacation. You deserve it. Although, I'm sure that your hentai mind is already developing scenes for the next chapter!
^_^
Snow
Um, my mind isn't working properly, so this review really sucks, but I'm trying, ne? I like that your chapters are so long, eh, even if beta'ing takes freakin' forever! You really leave the reader satisfied. I think that is one of the reasons why you have such a following. The other reason in obvious. You are a class A hentai!
I know that you worked hard on this chapter and it turned out really well. Take a vacation. You deserve it. Although, I'm sure that your hentai mind is already developing scenes for the next chapter!
^_^
Snow
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow you updated and that was freakin hot too. I wonder if any males read this? They'll definitely need a cold shower =P Lemon's the plot! lol
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow . . . Wow . . . I think I need a cold shower. Make that very cold. That was absolutely amazing. I hope you and your laptop produce many a more work. And I'll be back to read more. Madre Etva.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was well worth the wait, I loved it.
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, good job. (HA! Understatement of the year)
After reading this I had to take the loooongest cold shower EVER. This is so amazingly well done my brain malfunctions after I read it. I adore the thought and effort that went into Hiei. He is harder to write sometimes. You get everyones emotions and actions and thoughts down so well.
And the lemony goodness. One can not begin to describe how incredibly hot it was. I loved how Yuusuke was incontrol without being over the top. Love Yuusuke's dirty talking too.
I have to ask(beg) if you would do a certain bit because I think you're the only one who could do it....Could you do somesort of 'after Sensui' thing. I imagine both of their emotions would be all out of whack and no one ever goes into the detail of the trauma that would bring to a pre-relationship. Especially watching Yuusuke die again. Certainly all Yuusuke's new instincts would make for an 'interesting' lemon scene.
But back to worshiping the new chapter of greatness (the whole fic!)
Mmmmm Kurama. And I took a peek at Ryo's pic(s). I got inspired to write, but just wow. I can so see how it would affect someone's writing.
I especially liked Hiei's 'I didn't know it could be like this' It seems very Hiei in how he wouldn't be one to do foreplay. But really if you think about it it doesn't seem like something most demon's would bother with.
Keep up the amazing work with whatever you choose to do! ^____^ I am such a happy fairy right now....Lol.
After reading this I had to take the loooongest cold shower EVER. This is so amazingly well done my brain malfunctions after I read it. I adore the thought and effort that went into Hiei. He is harder to write sometimes. You get everyones emotions and actions and thoughts down so well.
And the lemony goodness. One can not begin to describe how incredibly hot it was. I loved how Yuusuke was incontrol without being over the top. Love Yuusuke's dirty talking too.
I have to ask(beg) if you would do a certain bit because I think you're the only one who could do it....Could you do somesort of 'after Sensui' thing. I imagine both of their emotions would be all out of whack and no one ever goes into the detail of the trauma that would bring to a pre-relationship. Especially watching Yuusuke die again. Certainly all Yuusuke's new instincts would make for an 'interesting' lemon scene.
But back to worshiping the new chapter of greatness (the whole fic!)
Mmmmm Kurama. And I took a peek at Ryo's pic(s). I got inspired to write, but just wow. I can so see how it would affect someone's writing.
I especially liked Hiei's 'I didn't know it could be like this' It seems very Hiei in how he wouldn't be one to do foreplay. But really if you think about it it doesn't seem like something most demon's would bother with.
Keep up the amazing work with whatever you choose to do! ^____^ I am such a happy fairy right now....Lol.