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That's okay! I was still close! Oh jezus! Kuwabara's dad was hurting and stuff! There is a lot of pressure for men and boys to be tough and all— and a lot of biased that says that only women suffer like that. Onlt women are sexually abused/harassed or raped. I can see Kuwabara being embarrased and ashamed because of that.

If anyone reads this, they'll never have a reason to call him Kuwabaka again. Unless they read my Kurama bashing story... which was only one chapter for an expirament on Kurama fangirls.

Arrrg!!! I ranted again!

I love this chapter, the emotions in it were so raw that I could feel them. Also it caught us up to what happened and the police investigating. I dp hope some other ferrygirl was neer when Shizuru died, Botan is so caring about her friends.

Is there going to be a threesome with hiei and kuwa and kurma

Oo~oo! I'll that sick sonuvagun myself if Yusuke don't kill him first! *pets Kuwa* Poor baby! I'll make it all better!

Heh heh heh... I've been gone forever. I love the update!

Yusuke mat be acting different around the kid but he's NOT out of character. Thats about how he acted around the little kid he saved that time the was first killed, at age 14.

Okay, It seens the father of Kazuma Kuwabara tried to get him to gowith him and when the son refused is when the shootings happened?? I meant to as before why was Hiei left behind when Yusuke& Kurama brought Kazuma & Shizuru in, but there one to two reasons=
1- obviously Yusuke had him looking for Dawn. But Hiei is faster than Yusuke, he could have taken one of the Kuwabara siblings while Yusuke looked for his sister. So I can't help but wonder about possiblity #2

2- Hiei stayed behind to 'take care of' the shooter. Have you shown the police talking to them about the shooting yet? (I forgot if you had, it's late) but I don't remember anything being said if the father was still alive or dead.

awww, thats so sad, damn you, you just like killing people off don't you!!!? tehe, sorry, ill try to calm down, tehe, UPDATE SOON DAMNIT!!!!...........hehe

Okay from what you said in ch 3 and the way Yusuke is acting ...I'm going to make a wild guess.......


There's no mention of Keiko so far.... Yusuke is hysterical over the little girl....is Dawn his child?? He was the one to ask about Shizuru... is Dawn thier kid???


Sooo the parent is the one to shoot.... the title gave a hint "Daddy did it". BUT the question is =whose father was it? Kurama's step-father seems okay and has seen how Kurama is, so I am not going to guess him (although being an AU fic, that could change). My guess is that it was Kazuma's father.

Okay you know what? That was evil! Shizuru just dead and all... Who does Dawn belong to anyway?

Great chapter! Who did do the shooting? Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)