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May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! that's all i can say. good story though i'm kinda upset that u killed shizuru but it made the story better. i liked that fact yusuke had a sister and took care of her, so urameshi like. also the fact that hiei was cool with everything was amazing and i liked the fact that he killed toshiba, damn bastard. all in all this was a good story
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that ending did not suck. this is great. you are officially my fav author ").... please update!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah and there were spelling errors! But I loved it nonetheless! Wait til Altar comes and reads this! Btw... Toshiba had a bit of an accent.... what's his nationality?
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an awsome ending! You should teak the end of this chapter, though, just a little, by adding a little bit more. I understand the pressure, though of trying to up date the story fast enough, and when you're not in the mood. I still enjoyed this story, though, and I would love to read more of what you wrote. Great job!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, come on. It can't end that soon! You should have Toshiba kidnapped him or something it to soon for the story to end. But maybe Toshiba not real dead that Hiei don't full kill him. I hope so I still what to the story to go on. You just can't end it that soon!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing.
One of the few on this site I actually like.
One of the few on this site I actually like.
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I love it update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Even though it was short, I loved it! I'm so glad you updated! I was beginning to die from waiting too long! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please up date sooner then you did last time!
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so good! I haven't been here in a while and I have no new chaps to show for it!
Pssst... I'm alive!
Pssst... I'm alive!
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great chapter. I love it but I real hope you update soon agian. So have Kurama real mark Kuwabara as his mate? PLease tell me he has if not could you make a chapter of it? And when do you plan to update the hiei/kuwabara fic? I hope it come out soon! Oh and my friend Jovianwolfgirl is asking me if you will review her story Bloody Hands. Anyway hurry and update on your stories!