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for A Bright and Beautiful, Sunny Day

by Phillepa

person kit-kit
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice though i hope the leukamia hasn't return.
person She-wolf
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow you update. I like the chapter but why is Kazuma sick again? Oh, I hope he dosen't die! Update soon I like to read the next chapter.
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am soooo glad you updated!! I love this story!! Oh, I'm happy about the new apartment, but sad that it will take you a while to update! Please update soon!!
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I screamed once I saw that you updated. I screamed again after reading the chapter!!!! OH NOOOOOOOO!!!! Yusuke should worry more about Kuwa doing labor than being a pleasure slave!!!! In Kuwa's condition, he would die from the labor!!! OH, YUSUKE BETTER SAVE HIM OR I'LL KILL YUSUKE!!! Anyway, great chapter and can't wait to read the next one (Screams again) Sorry, I'm just excited!
person Altar of Wishes
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooo! *out of breath* No torment for Kuwa! No!
person kit-kit
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
short chapter but i liked it im glad you updated i almost thought you were giving up on this story.
person She-wolf
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice new chapter. So Kazuma be solved into salvey? I know Hiei would have a few of his own. Now what going to happend next? and coud you tell more or were I could find those quizzes?
person Lindsay
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eloo, love your story, update soon!!!
person She-wolf
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehe...I like the chapter. So someone what Kazuma as a human salve? Hmm, cool I hope Yusuke and the others save him fast. Hurry with the next chapter, ok?
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You better get it started! That was awsome! I can't wait to read what the reason was for them to kidnap Kuwabara! I loved it! Please update soon!