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Grrr at you and the cliffy!!!!! i want more plz plz pts ats a good stroy so far. odd. but i like it. continue it soon plzzzzzzzzzz


Xtreme Red Dragon

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Mar

Sqeeeeeee! *kisses the fic and hugs the author* I love this! Finally a fic where Yusuke's has the jealousy problem! Sorry, I read too many stories where Keiko's being made into a bitch right after she breaks up with Yusuke.

^___^ I loved it! Is Kurama going to ask Keiko more questions? Is Kuronue going to get his body and his pendant back and if he does get his body back, what's he going to do? And how will Keiko react to him having a body? Okay. I fell in love with the story. Please update soon!

Very good!

WOW. Fucking awesome. You managed to get everyone in character, and the concept is very interesting, Kuronue being Keiko's imaginary friend. (Wonder how Yûsuke's going to react to this?) The only point is that your spelling and grammar need just a touch of work, and your use of Japanese terms kind of threw me off a bit (even though I speak the language). *applauds*

finally one with Kuronue!! :D anyway I like the start of this story, please continue!! Update soon!