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I'm enjoying this story, but there's one minor detail in Chapter 5 that really touches on one of my pet peeves. The hymen, aka "maidenhead," is NOT an internal barrier. It's actually a piece of skin, an extension of the labia that covers the OUTSIDE of the entrance to the vagina, with a hole in it large enough for fluids to pass. This is a common mistake in fanfic lemons. The stretchiness of the hymen varies from girl to girl; some lose the hymen during childhood from playing sports, riding bikes, etc, and some don't even lose it during sex, so it has to be surgically removed. There is NO internal "virginal" barrier.

Thanks.

--Your friendly neighborhood anatomist

*waves* Hi! I'm still reading this.... I'm just lazy. *gives the author some cookies* Kurama sure has Yusuke beat. Oh well. He should have been thinking about Keiko.

go man, what a chapter
loved it
cant wait for the next one
thanks for the GREAT read

Sweet! Really, really good, continue please! Its a lovely story. Well written.

One word can only sum this story up: WOW, this is definitely one of the best YYH fics I've read in quite a while. Absolutely astounding plot! I love it! Continue updating! I'm a big fan of the series and have several YYH fics in the works.

OMG! I LOVE IT!! It is hilarious! I love all the witty comments that Kuronue makes and by the way, I googled him to see what he looked like ^^ nice choice. lol. Oh my I hope you finish this soon if it's not already. BREAK UP WITH YUSUKE!! lol. I like Yusuke and all but eh eh the other two choices are much more enticing. lol. Oh man I hope this isn't going to be a love triangle square thing. lol anyway, ja ne!

Eyra

still very good and am waiting impateintly for an update.
i hope you haven't forgotten us or your story! XP

I am really enjoying this story and hope that you update it. It is a nice original idea for a story and nicely written.

Very well done I applaud you! Not many people can keep all the characters in character and have good spelling and grammer. There were only a few grammatical errors, but I think they were just computer glitches, but all in all they were easy to figure out. May I suggest putting a slight Japanese translation note at the end and/or beginning of the chapter? 'Cause I don't know what Toushin means XP

Either way I cannot wait for chapter six.

And kagome... foreshadowing perhaps? I recall a certain vertically challenged fire youkai mentioning a thing or two about priestesses...

And how old are they all? Or did I miss that in a chapter somewhere?

::..LoR..::

I enjoyed it very much, would like for u to update because sometimes YU YU's fanfiction aren't updated which really pisses me off.. so please please UPDATE SOON!!!