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Hey great story. I am guessing the culprit was Miyuki who broke in and stole things from the safe. Yuske and Botan make a good couple. I never thought Hiei would be with someone but great story. The only thing is that u had a few spelling errors but great writing and keep up the great work.

This story is great! keep up the good work

So I just happened to come across this story and just decided to read it. I love it! I read all those chapters!!!! It took me awhile, (was trying to multitask). Anyway, I love it and I love the pairing, always thought they were a cute couple. So please update soon!!!

good story you should finish it :)

Thought of going canon nazi, but I just can't. I want to say so many things in defense of my favourite characters but I can't. It drives me mad. The only that I can appreciate are the lemons because the story is like acid.

Sorry. Very sorry I just had to get that out of my system. So very sorry. I think that I'm going crazy.

GOOD STORY

Not that I read much or anything, but I thought that this might anyone who looks at reviews:

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I'm really enjoying this story. It's angsty but fun. And I'm hoping that Yusuke chooses Boton. I'm not a big Keiko fan. Good luck with the next chapter. I'll be waiting!

ah it's nice to actually be able to post my reviews. Wow...so many people posted reviews already. I feel like I'm late to the party or something.

I guess it's needless to say that I'm addicted to this story. When Yusuke went to Botan's appartment to ask her how she felt...the warm fuzzies were just running rampant which resulted in me making the girliest high pitched excited "eeee" kinda sound I've heard in a long whileore ore please! (wow...I make it sound like it's a bowl of rice or something. "Please sir, could I have some more?" "More!? You want some more?" ::cough:: ignore that) Keep up the great work and please updat soon.

~Yuurei

I don't really lieke this pairing 'cause it don't make since. Why would Keiko, who spent so much time on Yusuke, just dump him like that? Botan doesen't leik Yusuke like that, but you make it a 1 night stand and that'll b that.