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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i luved it luved it luved!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't wait to read the next chappie! omg this is soooo exciting! update soon as you can!
~serena~
~_^
~serena~
~_^
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had read the start on another site but now that i got to read all of that it is really good. I wounder if hiei will ever tell me he loves me and mean it?
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say I've read all of the chapters in your Alph story, and their all great!! Please keep writing, and could you email me when you write the next chapter?
I haven't gotten around to reading your other stories, but when I do I'm sure they'll be great.
I haven't gotten around to reading your other stories, but when I do I'm sure they'll be great.
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of the more intense you/hiei fics I've ever seen. A good flow, an you are doing well with it. I like how you are playing the plot out. I'm enjoying the story very much so. You are doing well, an I like how with each chapter you really give it your all to try an make it better than the last one. This has been fun to read, an I thank you for posting it.
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay an update! is kurama gonna be okay i hope he shall! that seemed fun, i wish i could fight! ya fights!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is SOOOO great!!! I don't mind the longness of it (I read your AN.), matter of fact, I like it! It intrigues me to have an actual story instead of just mindless sex, not that i mind it! ^_~ Anyway, keep writing and i'll keep coming. This story is just too good to pass up!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How? How could you just leave it there? It was just getting exciting again. Please update soon.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(walks around room) In my last review I forgot to say a few things. Why couldn't you have some unexpected person come in an save the day....er night other than just Kurama? Like a wolf demon such as oh I don'no maybe Kouga! Even if it's a reader and Hiei story it still might be exciting. Pweeeease? Update soon, please.
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoot! *jigs* Finally. X3 I hope you update soon.
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *does happy dance* you updated!!! YAY!!!! great chapter! can't wait for the next!