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for Alpha

by Ametank

person Black Tiger
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would email you but my computer isn't working quite right so I can't. my computer hardly ever even lets me on the enternet.
person Jean
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi. New reader and I love your story. Its realy easy to get into it. Hope you get the next one out soon. ::try to hold back the need to scream how much she loved the story:: hehe <.< >.>
person kyli the wolf hanyou
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update this fic AS SOON AS POSSIBLE, cuz this KICKS A$$. and make the fic with Kouga
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Oh man! Hiei and I are really pissed off. I can't wait to see what will happen next! I hope this won't affect the pups...update soon!
person Dark Priestess
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed Alpha in forever. It still kicks ass.
person denise
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NICE...very nice...Hiei can be a bitch in the ass hahaha keep writing!
person Hiei Lonewolf
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Interesting. Do continue."

Hiei Lonewolf
P.S. "I would like to see your website that is holding the artwork contest."
person neoki
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh were in truble aren't we? you do not mess with hiei is way to unperdictable at times esppecially when it concerns his sister! i wonder what mr.imsohotandpissy is gonna do? *wink*
person Twilight
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dame this is getting really good please write more and just to let you know I think that the way you put the character I think that she's a perfect match for Hiei!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UP-DATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person *shrugs* who can say?
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brilliant story as usual.i loved it!. please write another one soon. i can't wait to see what happens!