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by Ametank

person Twilight
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hay this is getting so good that I'm glade I just keep on reading each chap.PLASE UP-DATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Hiei and my ki are strong as one!! That is so awesome...it's ashame we had to find out by fighting each other! I hope my pups are alright, and that they won't be born prematurlly...I wonder how many I'll have...(gazes off) We got to name them....(runs off to find Hiei muse with a baby book) Update soon!!!
person Sky
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chappie. Please update and add me to your list pwease.
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a GREAT story! I really enjoy reading it. It's so well written. Looking forward to the next chapter. I'd like to join the update list if that's okay. My email address is GundamSEEDGirl@aol.com
person Neoki
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! that thingy me and hiei made sounds soooooo....beutiful....i love the little fire-boy hes so hot! keep up the good work.....or else!
person Yami Yugi Rock
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi it's Yami Yugi Rock again,
I love your storey's.I think you go int to book writting.
person Tanya
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i've been a fan of your story for a LONGGGGGG time, I've been reading it since you posted your first chapter. lol.

I loved these two chapters, please update soon. Your story is the ONLY one i read, I dont have time for anybody else's stories ^__~
person Dark
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grawr! o.o Update quickly! *eats your cliff hangers* x.x
person Nite Nite *not logged in*
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Teary eyed* EEEEEEEEEEEEEE HIEI HOW COULD YOU BE SO CRUEL TO ME! *Rubs her stomach* AHHH AND TO THINK YOUR MY BABIES DADDY! *Cries*

Hiei: *Sweatdrops* Um...Nite....clam down.

NN: NOOO! I've had enough of your cold heartedness! *Looks at you* Wonderful job with this, I love the drama...grrr...baka Hiei! *Smacks him and storms off*

Hiei: *Rubs smacked spot and looks at Kurama*

Kurama: *Raises hands up* I am soo not in this.

Hiei: *Growls and stalks off to find Nite*

Kurama: While they work out their...issues...update again soon!
person Sky
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no clash of the spirits this can't be good.Please update.