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yay my babies are coming! i want to dress them in warm blankets and name them and...sory! pleases updates for the children! they love to be born to the person that is me and my mate hiei!

ohh, I loved it! Whens the next chapter? ^_^.

PLEASE UPDATE! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE WITH A HIEI AND KURAMA PLUSHIE ON TOP!!!!

hey, good job on the new chapter!^-^ Can't wait for the next one! Let me know when you update,K?

Great chapter! Cant wait for the next one! God I suck at reviews..... *^_^*

Hm, not too bad! You're a pretty good writer. The only thing that I can think of that might help, is to make the story a little less confusing. In the earlier chapters, I was easy to understand but as this story progressed, it got a lot more complcated and I almost the whole plot line. Now things are cleared up somewhat, but I think that it is rather confusing for some other people. Just a thought though, you don't have to take it seriously, and I hope that you don't take this in the wrong way. I think that this is an amazing story and I'd love for you to continue it as soon as possible. Good luck and get some rest. See ya!

Heh, good job on this chapter!

Aiya!!! i'm so sorry!! it's almost done, it's just i had request's from school and fanart-central.net to finish up before i could even start on yours! it will be ready soon, i swear!! great chap. update soon please!!

hey, yay finally my pups are goin to be born, i'm soooooooo happy, i hope they come out healthy.... can't wait to read the next chappie!!! keep up the good work. luv it luv it luv it
Serena

NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, DONT STOP THERE THIS IS HELLA TIGHT. UPDATE SOON I LOVE THIS STORY.