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by Ametank

person kyli the wolf hanyou
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
updaaaaaate sooon!
person kiara3XoXlilgirlangel
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII LLLLLLLLLLUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV TTTTTTTTTHHHHHHIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTTTTTOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYY ... i truely luv this story ..... i'm going crazy not knowing wutz going 2 happen... so UPDATE please & Thank u LUV YA
person Wraith
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it, keep going.
person Neko_Baby
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww why did you have to stop it there it was REALLY starting to get good and then BOOM! End of chapter! *Sigh* Well I hope you can update soon cause I am really enjoying your story it is so cool! ^__^
person ~*~*~
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!!
person Asilin
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! just caught up on the latest chapters and they were awesome!!! i love it! especially that ki-manifest battle....could i steal that idea for another story?? please? anyway, great chapters! can't wait till you update!
person Dark Wolf
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM


I just read the rating and that's totally unfair! Only 3 stars! Ignorent people don't now real quality when they see it!
So I rated 5!
person nyoko
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy shit its so great im speechless. i mcan only say wow. update soon or else please
person lonewolf_Hiei
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"That was interesting. I would not want to go through that much pain.... and knowing that it is not over. Keep up the good work on the story."

Hiei Lonewolf
person kuramasbluegurl
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great fanfic, you had me clued to the computer till I finished reading.
I love it. Thank you for sharing such a great story. I would like to be added to your mailing list.
I seriously can't wait to read your next update.
Infact I'm going to look at your other stories and read those while I wait for the update for this story.
thanks again.
bye