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by Ametank

person AoA ^_~
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like this chapter, it's been a while since i got to read any of Alpha ^_^;. and it's wonderful to see some things really can be cured with a hug, lol.
person -midnightdemon
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love the story. cant wait for you to update
person Asilin
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
surrogate??? wtf? and no explanation for us??!! *cries* no fair! please update soon! i've got to know what's going on!
person Neoki Jaganshi
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awsem chapter. question what is a surget? if i am hiei's then what the hell would i need one for? lol love it. continue pplz!
person Dark Raven
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice so far. I like how this is going. CYOAs were banned on many sites, so I'm happy to see one again. Please please PLEASE get to the lemon soon!!! Update, thanks and LOL. *Howls* ^_^
-Dark Raven
person Dark Priestess
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thankies for the chapter! Hurry and post the next! ^_^ OH! Can you e-mail me when you are going to update? Please?
person thorn
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story! update soon!
person Neoki Jaganshi
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! what a great chapter...i never thought that hiei would agree to going to 'my' pack. but he did aint he so cute? ja ne.
person Dark Priestess
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are great with suspense!! Thanks for updating. ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Asahane
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^-^ This was a great chapter! *dances* Can't wait for the next one. ^-^ Write more!