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by Ametank

person Tinberg-san
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I read it the first 4 chapters on mm.org, not sure if I reviewed or not- I'm really bad at remebering to do that type of stuff- but I really do respect the effort you put into this. I'd really be happy if you could email me when you update. Well, much praise- Tinberg-san
person Serena
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi, i would like to tell you, i like the way the story is coming out. keep up the great work! ^^ E-mail me when you up dated!, i can`t wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^*
person Mookie-Chan
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey it's mookie-chan have u read my fics? like the story keep it up^_^



I reviewed for yours so PLEASE REVIEW FOR MINE your life your youko and the squeal k?
person animegirl007
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story and I like it alot.....update soon and it you can email when you are updating. I can't wait to read more....
person denise
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love your story, keep it up. is it possible to email me when you update? thanks in advance!
person Saiyuki
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is really good! But I just have a couple of questions. Before I ask, though, you gotta know that I am only informing you of these in the correct way, and that I'm Japanese (or half, anyway) so I kinda know what I'm talking about.

First, I wanted to know why you chose Kami as a name for your pack leader. Erm, Kami is god, if you don't know, and it just didn't make sense to me...t ift if you wanted to make her seem godly or something, it worked! I was so held in awe!

Next, why Okami for the brother's name? Well, Okami is the name of a women inn keeper or care taker of a hot springs. It just seems wierd for the guy to have a women title as a name.

And last, but not least, when Hiei calls Kami-san 'onna', why did they take it as an insult? Onna just means girl, so why did the OOC freak like that?

PLease don't take this as a flame! I was just asking a couple of questions I wanted to have answered! I'd appreciate it if you emailed your reply to me!

Saiyuki

P.S: You can bet I'll keep reading this story, so please keep updating! And send me an email when you update, if you can! Ja ne!
person misa
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
person pensword
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
person Neoki Jaganshi
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i want a e mail when you update! so thats what a surgute is. it really really sucks thank god i dont have one update soon.
person Asilin
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, i just wanted to know how surrogate applied in this situation. nice chapter! and would you e-mail me as well when you update? thanks!