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by Ametank

person denise
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a good chapter. keep up the good work and update soon!
person Dark Priestess
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! I love the way you describe things in the story! Oh, I'm interested in your contest, whatever it is... E-mail me! Thankies ^_^
person SERENA
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved it, ooooooooooohhhhhhhhh but i' m sad that hiei will be gone for a week. *starts crying* i.........i'll get over it...............................................hn. can't wait til the next chapter!
thanx
~yuyusailor13~
person Asilin
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY CHAPPIE!!!!! ^________^ good chapter! a chapter does not need a lemon to be good...so no need to apologize! neway, a contest would be cool. i'd love to be an oc in a scene. well, hope you update soon!
person Mukuro Meki
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update the fic it's really good so far
person hm
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool story, but well you last chapter seems ot be cut off. Is that jsut my comp? Cool story though, love the amin character.
person hm
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool story, but well you last chapter seems to be cut off. Is that just my comp? Cool story though, love the main character.
person cassie
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehehe my ashley has done wonderfully. i loved the chapter. the events made me want to keep on reading it. the only thing i didnt like was when i saw ure little comment about reviewing...that meant the chapter was over and i didnt like that it was over since i would have loved to have more. good god that was a long drawn out sentence that didnt need to be there.
person Tinberg-san
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another awsome chapter. You really are one of my favourite authoresses. Keep up your great writing skills and I look forward to your next chapter. Ja!
person i read. i review. 'nuff said.
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i would like to ne on your e-mailk update list, please. loving this fic. please continue.