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by Ametank

person Redbells *Didn\'t logg in*
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* That was great, hiei is SOO hawaii *giggles again*

You just HAVE to tease us with a clif hanger *pouts*

Cant wait for next chappie, me want more, me want more ^__^ Okay, im shut up and be patient now
person KimiAnn1RoseElle1
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please coutinue I really like and would like an E-mail when you up-date please
person tryxi
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay another chpt. i hate the cliffs tho but love the story. is hiei finally starting to have more feelings toward the character? one can only hope hehe. im also a die hard hiei fan but i like kurama to. i havent had the chance to read the new fic yet but im sure its just as good. pls update soon.
person denise
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
coool chapter man, your story is great! i hope you update soon cause i cant wait! keep up the good work!
~denise
person Dark Priestess
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiei can be quite demanding can't he? He's such a little bastard, but I love him anyway. ^_^
person neoki niogi jaganshi
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! yusuke didn't shoot me! and hiei saved me i soooooooooo happy. i want more story right now i need hiei-sama! please update swiftly demon dreams and silver wings to you.
person Asilin
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
he's going to kill me?!! the baka! anyway, good to have you back! and nice chappie! can't wait for the next one!
person Serena
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it. please up-date again, i can't wait to find out what happens to me next.
person ...
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice
person Dark Priestess
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You made us wait forever for that chapter, and then you end it with a cliffy. You're evil... ^_^