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by Ametank

person neoki
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh............i was so close to doin hiei again that aint fair! and why would anyone be so mean as to rape a wolf?
person Dark Priestess
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Took you a while to update huh? Oh well, it was worth it. I wanted to die when I watched the Yu Yu Hakusho movie too. They could've at least had the same voice for Kuwabara. (It would've been funnier that way)
person denise
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey great story, took a long time to update but it's alright. i hope you keep on updating quickly though ^-^ heh
person Dani
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, that was great!And, yes! It felt like centuries~ before you updated! Thank you~. Glad your inspiration hasn't thrown the bucket in the well!
person Asilin
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
which movie are we talking about? the 2nd one? cause i thought Hiei's voice was quite good for that one...*blushes* neway, interesting chapter. what's going to happen next?
person Hiei Lonewolf
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"You say that she is unmated, but yet she is pregnant...? I am confused there, although thisis a good fanfiction and I do enjoy reading it. it actually has a plot that is not just about sex.... But do continue."
- Hiei Lonewolf
person crystal_moon13
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
argh! I hate you! You always write cliff hangers and I have to wait a week until I find out what happens! hehe sorry. I really love your story, please keep up the good work and update soon!
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Please update soon!
person kyli the wolf hanyou
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon, please
person Asilin
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
as a fellow writer (not here, but on ffn), i've done my fair share of not updating, so how can i yell at another author who isn't updating? neway, nice chapter, but evil cliffie! i want a kiss!!!!! pwease? *begs*