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by Ametank

person Bouken
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(chap 9)

D___D!!!

he could really have killed me... Yusuke you damn dimwit, what the hell where you thinking!!!??

What I like the most about this story, is that you only get the informations trough what "you" see yourself :3 You know what your doing and if I ever become a famous manga-ka as I dream of (goes on a drawing school to become the best!) then I'll gift you with a doujin about this!!

~

Waah you stopped when Hiei was SO close to me!!! Dooh what's going to happen??? (Well I know XD but still, gyaaah!!!)

~Bouken
person Bouken
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(chap 10)

This is SO much my favorite chap until now!!! "Horrible revelation!!!" Gyyaaaah!!!

He kissed me, and he *blush* God, and then Kurama interfered!!

Nooes, he's so mean!! I'm so horrified and sad, stupid stupid Nii-san TwT ... God, I've to read chapter 11 NOW!!!

YES!! I've seen the YYH movie, I AGREE!!! Grr, I wanted to kill them as well, those, those... DIMWITS!!! >.< kyah...

~Bouken
person Bouken
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chap 11)

Hiei showed up, Hiei showed up~ *dancy dancy*

ARRRGHH!!! So GOOD!!!!

I made him bow *snicker* But F*ck, what the hell might he ask in return?? Qwo!!! I almost fear to read on, gaah xDD Oh huhu :b Pull yourself together Bou *mental slap* sigh...

Na na na *sighs a song as she moves on to next chapter*

You've a gift you know? ~Still I can't get enough, though I've good imaginations, I CAN'T, absolutely CAN'T imaginine this will ever has a end, the story D___D noooes... Maybe it's cause I don't want to :b

~Bouken <3
person Bouken
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uhh hai!!

I'ven't read this story all the way trough the chapters, but it's sooo great!!! Maybe I should check if you're even done yet, but else, if you ain't, then I would love to recieve an email, when you update!

Badluck__Kujaku@hotmail.com

I will review somemore, just had to come a bit into the story ^^ wow ya have done a great work until now, so I will look feverously forward to more chapters... Huhu.. :b
person Bouken
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
IT'S SO FLIPPING GOOD!!!!!

(Though I still havn't read all chapters there are, i'll still give you as much feedback i can!!!)

Honestly, you rocks :b Can't get enough of it, though I actually should be in my bed by now XD (to be true, I'm in bed o.o, sitting in it while reading XD this apartment is so small x3! Uops, to many private info's, we're talking bout your cool creation here!!!)

I love the fact it's "me" and hiei... *drool* Oh wow!!! More more more!! *hurries to read the rest of the chappies!!!* <3
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! I check back like everyday 2 see if you've written more, but you haven't! WAHHHHH!!! HURRY UP!
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, thats just plain mean. after all this time and u end it like that. what did i ever do to u, whatever it was..im very.very.very sorry. please update soon.
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am so glad you're back and updating. i'm been waiting a long time for this chapter lol. well done! -x-
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please don't tell me you've given up on this story, its one of my favorites.
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its been a very long time sence u updated, do u enjoy torchering me?