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OMG! i totally disagree with this tanya whoever! i llove loonog stories and totally thjink you should extend this story to your intende length. you should be trying to please mostly yourself with this story any how. i for one, would be most unpleased if you finished this story in two chapters and you were unsatisfied. besides, hiei has to grow to love me more openly. It would be such a shame if you ended this wonderful story with a half-ass ending. please continue this story and update soon. forget tanya's review and shrug it off. dont worry about it. just think to yourself 'Tanya who?'

Woah I think it's way too soon for you to start wrapping things up! I love your story and as long as you want to make it is fine, because it's kept my interest the whole way through and undoubtedly will until the very end be it two or fifteen chapters away. I personally think it should be longer because I don't feel it's dragging on and there are unresolved conflicts that I feel two chapters would not sufficiently wrap up. However, it's your choice and if you want to write it shorter go ahead and I'll still love your story I just personally wish it's as long as it was first intended to be.

Oh and by the way this story is wonderful! I never gave you a review before because I'm not one to naturally review (I know it's horrible) but this question gave me the chance to review and I just want to say how awesome your story is! It's really enjoyable and the plot totally has my interest, and I just love your style of writing. Anyways, I hope my opinion helps some!

for starters i really love this story. with that said... your doing fine. don't cut your story just to reach the end. if the only point to a story was to make one simple plot and quickly end it, all fanfics would be dull,predictable, and would all be one-shots. i have nothing against one-shots, but i like to read those who arent as well. just my opinion.

I love your story, its appsolutly great. But......(ya, there is always a but) I think your loosing the plot of the story and dragging it on further then need be. Im not saying you should rush it or anything, but (I dont know) I guess you could loose some of the "emotional" bit and get more into humor (Im feeling sappy vibes from this story now). Now I dont mean you should add 'smut' or anything, that would really be a turn around without cause, but be creative (I know you'll think of something)

PS: I dont read fanfiction anymore, i get to busy. Your story is the only one I do read (I get the e-mails ^__^) so It would be kinda disapointing if this story looses its spunk.

Funny always works when things start to get.....difficult (Difficult--Something is making me feel like I spelt that wrong.....)

hey, i loved it , as always............lol, cant wait to update, i would like to do the fanart! i love drawing

wow, i've been waiting for an update for a long time! great job on that!

update soon ^_^

I'm so glad ...I get to makeup with Kurama...and aren't my pups ready to be born yet????....This waiting is killing me......I can't wait to see what they look like.....update soon......

interesting chappie...i likes! and i understand about classes. but 3 lit courses? ouch. reading intensive! have fun with that. neway update as soon as you can!

hiei is all pissy! he so cute...... i cant wiat for my brother to visit....thank you for updating yur storu